July 13th, 2012 at 09:19pm
Wow I love this story so far. It's really depressing and gloomy but I love it! haha.
I really like your layout and this story somewhat reminds me of Girl, Interrupted.
I saw that you commented on my Dean's Girl story but I just didn't have the time to read one of your stories.
I really enjoy reading this and am definitely subscribing. 8)
Layout It's really kinda cool, but I would find a way to blend the picture into the background.. if you use Photobucket, you can put a border around the picture(black or whatever) and then make the actual page background that color and it'll blend really well. :)
Chapter 1-3 I like how you go back and forth between before and after the 'event'. Her mother reminds me of of one of my characters' mother's from a while back... what's sad is some mothers actually act like this after their daughter was raped by their(the mother's) boyfriend.
From what I've been reading, I have a pretty good idea what the 'event' is, but the way that you're writing the story, it makes me just want to keep reading. :)
Now on chapter 3...and it's nice to know she's bipolar now. Explains a bit more. :) And damn.. based on some actual events? Makes it feel even more real. I congratulate you on that feat.