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  • Robin 'The Sidekick'

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    You spoke for all of us fans who are in love with someone who might never think of us. I loved it. I'm not a huge fan of Andy, but I do agree with you that he is beautiful and that he has a unique voice. I love that you let it all out and didn't make it sound all creepy with your fantasies.

    I'm glad that you weren't all, Oh, I wish that he loved me back! If only he wasn't famous and he was all mine! Why?!? Though we all do tend to feel like that at times. Anyway, this is lovely. I don't have to give you constructive criticism because you have amazing grammar and description. Good job, I liked it.
    December 17th, 2011 at 06:37pm
  • the apex predator;;

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    Also my Rhet & Comp teacher told us to bring in something we thought was good writing and to write a small essay about it.

    And I'm doing this.

    :] <3
    September 14th, 2011 at 06:08pm
  • the apex predator;;

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    HOLY MOTHER OF FUCK JESUS FUCKING CHRIST IN A WHEELCHAIR FUCKED SIDEWAYS
    I had this longass comment typed out and because God hates me and wants to make me miserable it ended up screwing me over and deleting itself.

    So.

    Basically.
    I thought this was really gorgeous. It hit close to home because of the whole Bill thing and the journal so reading it definitely took me back to the past. It was hard because I do remember what this feels like, to love someone this way and know it is pretty much impossible for you to get with them because of how famous they are. Which is stupid. And people telling you you can't be with them, or love them, is stupid. Because they are normal people with more people that know them. They're, like, popular. And no one ever said you can't fall for the popular kid. You're not asking them to love you back, you're just stating you love them because of what they show that they are like. But you know this already.

    Honestly I do think you have a chance with Andy. I do. You just have to find the right time and place to get with him. The kind of raw emotion you have in this just lets me know you are the kind of person that can show exactly what you feel in exactly the right way to make it so you don't come off as a creepy fangirl. If you need me to do anything, let me know. :]

    Also I have bad news.
    Dahvie is single again.
    And I may be falling for him.
    We are in the same boat, chica. :[
    September 12th, 2011 at 02:07pm
  • losing control.

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    Awe <3

    That was adorable and gorgeous all at the same time. Your descriptions were amazing and the layout and banner were so pretty.

    I love how you wrote it in a way that was so real, and not in the 'omg he's so hawt' way that people tend to, you know?

    For something so short, it was filled with lots of emotion and gorgeousness. I loved it :D
    September 10th, 2011 at 03:34am
  • alustreya

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    I really don't have much to say to this except that you are a wonderful writer. The way you use your words are definitely amazing. They pack so much in such a little chapter; it kinda encourages me to write whatever I want, no matter how short.

    This is just absolutely wonderful. That's all I can say.
    September 5th, 2011 at 08:48am
  • nautical.

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    This was so beautiful c:

    It isn't often that you find something that actually seems real. And this, in my opinion, is about as real as it gets. Through your descriptions and the wayyou worded things, you could just feel the emotion you put into it. Like, you just conveyed your feelings perfectly.

    They layout was lovely, your descriptions were lovely, the grsmmar and such was flawless, and everything about this story was just dwuhssyklnfreswcvn.

    I honestly am kind of awe struck c: This is so amazing, when most ones on this subject would be, "zzohmigod, andy is hawt and is famouse and has a good voice lol I love him"

    You just completely did an awesome job.
    September 4th, 2011 at 09:06pm
  • Eimie

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    That was so lovely. <3

    I loved your descriptions especially when you describe his eyes. The detail was just really nice honestly.

    I think it also had a beginning, middle and end in it. There's like a sense of being at peace on what the person feels about Andy, that's what I felt reading this.It was emotional too and it made me think a bit.

    Anyway I loved everything about it, from the layout, the picture to the words and person in this themselves. <3
    September 4th, 2011 at 06:55pm
  • aubs

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    The beginning of this drabble made me smile from ear to ear because it was the cutest thing ever. I loved the three things that made her fall for Andy and how she was sort of fighting with herself over if those three things were what made her fall for him. But then when it mentioned that he would never love her in return made my smile go away. And then the last part came where it was said that is was all right that he didn’t return her love.

    It is rare that such a story entry such as this one made me love this, then hate it but then love it once more. Well, I didn’t really hate it but I’m sure you know what I mean. Anyway, enough of my rambling. I thought this was completely wonderful and just amazing.
    September 4th, 2011 at 01:57am
  • g r i m

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    Oooh, I like this! (so much so that I couldn't tear my eyes from the screen, and ended up dropping most of my food down my shirt because I was eating while reading.) Andy is amazing, and I love how you expressed the character's love. It's truly beautiful, and captures the way people feel when they're in love. AND, you managed to write about Andy without sounding like an obsessed fan girl. :)
    September 4th, 2011 at 01:18am
  • Painted Smiles

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    This so ADORABLE! UGH!
    I love how your words flow so nicely and smoothly! I also understand the main characters pain, I'm guessing thats you?
    I really wish you can send this out to Andy Sixx so he can come and visit you where ever you are ^.^

    I really love the layout,the summary, EVERYTHING! Did you actually get to meet him?
    September 3rd, 2011 at 11:16pm
  • Teddi Manni

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    This. Is. ADORABLE!

    I feel the pain of the main character as she was writing about how he smiles, how he is just so amazing but can never be hers. It broke my heart because I could relate to it so well.

    You have a remarkable talent for writing drabbles/one-shots. I am jealous. You write this with full-on emotion (probably because this character basically is you XD) and it's just so beautiful<3

    Wonderful job :D
    September 3rd, 2011 at 09:59pm
  • teen spirit.

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    Aww. <33

    Andy is amazing and I'm so glad for you that you got to meet him. (:

    This was amazing, the details were really what pulled me in and all of the emotion you put into this.

    Awesome job! (:
    September 3rd, 2011 at 09:12pm
  • jewelia.

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    This was a really beautiful drabble. I could really sense the emotion and the passion from the narrator. Your details were very pretty(: One thing I like in drabbles is not action; just mental thought all the way through, telling a story through emotion, and you did it. I really loved this. <3

    The layout was very pretty, although I wasn't a big fan of the sidebar, to be honest. I found very few grammar and spelling mistakes--your sentence structures are practically flawless. Even in the banner--the glint in his eye--it just reminded me of sincere and genuine love.

    Very beautiful piece; amazing job <3
    September 3rd, 2011 at 09:06pm
  • notrelevant

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    Aww :) <3 This was so adorable. One thing I have to point out is that I love how you said cyan instead of just plain old blue. And I think that it's completely possible for Andy to love you back. You should go on stage at one of his concerts and declare your love for him. >:) That would be so badass. So, I really love this little thing. It made my day much happier.
    September 3rd, 2011 at 09:04pm
  • Musicisthesavior

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    Wow, that was beautiful. You really have a way with words, and I could NOT agree more. Andy is a beautiful person and I agree with every single word of this. :)
    September 3rd, 2011 at 09:03pm