Into Your Arms - Comments

Continue plz!!!!

:O If she kills herself, I'll scream

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Hey this isn't a bad start, but maybe a a little spacing between the lines.
Your writing flow is good, it's readable and easy to follow along.
As I read I didn't find any spelling or grammatical errors.
But yeah the spacing between the lines would be good. Then again this is a good story :D

I have Watt Pad. I just don't know how to use it. However, if you got it, I'd follow you...

I meant mibba :)

I meant mibba :)

Even though it was a short chapter I still loved it and I have a watt pad account but I don't really use it I like minna better :)

yay me for guessing right! haha:) I love this story. I hope she doesn't get kicked out of Harvard. Buut, I have this feeling that she will, but then she'll end up going to college in CA with Cameron and they will live happily every after...:) But I hope she won't because that would be really sad. She's been through a lot already...but yeah.
NO FREAKING WAY?! YOU WENT TO A ONE DIRECTION CONCERT?!?!?!? I'M SO JEALOUS!!!!!!!
But anyway...:) Great story, can't wait for more:)

This is for the comment swap. I'm just going to read the first few chapters because I haven't read the first story yet, but I might go back and do that later.

I really like your layout, it's cute and simple. Aw, I think I really like Spencer already. Cameron just sounds absolutely adorable.

Can I make a suggestion? I think it'd be easier for your readers if your dialogue was spaced out instead of being all blocked.

Once the editors get their powers back, people might report you for it not being formatted like I have below. I just don't want your readers to lose out on a great story.

“Don’t worry Mikey, if she goes near you, I’ll try to save you.” I assured.

“TRY!?!” he cried.

“Hey I can’t make promises!” I laughed as I got into serving position.

I threw the ball in the air a few times for practice. Then I bent my knees a bit, threw the ball up in the air, jumped up, and spiked the ball.

Game on.

Oooh what's she gonna do?:) I'm excited. I'm glad she's sticking up for herself. I just hope it doesn't end bad. Can't wait for more:)

What is she going to to do?!? :O

I'm stupid and don't understand the end. What did she do??

asdjfhkklajs okay. lets just say i spent the ENTIRE day reading Love Is A Rollercoaster and Into Your Arms. I lovee it! and i really hope tyler didnt start some rumor… but cameron and spencer are adooorablee :)

Ugh. I hope that douche that raped her didn't start some stupid rumor. I'll be pissed and I'll like, randomly appear in the story as the girl who kicked his ass. :) Jusssst kidding. But really. I'll like, virtually slap him.
But I love this story:) And Cameron is cute being all protective of her:) Can't wait for more:)

OMG!! Why does everone seem to hate Spencer??!?!?! I NEED TO KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! :O

I can't wait for the next chapter I really want to know why people are talking about Spencer!!! :)

Why was everyone acting so weird around Spencer???

I saw "The Hunger Games" on Sunday. I have no intrest in the books but th movie was really good! I cried when Rue died too :(

I LOVE this!!!:) Can't wait for more:)
I saw it too!!! I'll probably go see it again:) I cried when Rue died too!! It was sad:(

I can't wait for the next chapter :D and the Hunger Games was amazing and I am most likely going to see it again. :)