What if... - Comments

I know that this is now over, and so not many people will look to the comments, but if anyone has read it - would anyone be interested in having, as a sequel, the real version? The story of the two people that triggered the entire tale?

I loved it. It showed like that people are sometimes so stupid and they should take more chances sometimes instead of just believing what their mind tells them. I felt like crying when Edmund died and I will recommend this story to people!

Great job!!!!!!!! :')

Why does Sarah have to be so DIFFICULT??? Argh. :)

My goodness, they are idiots! Dear me, what a pickle. Good chapter, though :)

As said, this is based on a fair amount of real situations - and a lot of it is simply the fear of looking the fool, and the fear of losing a friend and so on. Also thanks so much for the comments and reading and stuff :D

I only just realised you used my name suggestion! xD
Why can't these two admit their not over each other? I couldn't see any mistakes here :)

Aw, poor Sarah. How awkward was that?! :D Nice chapter :)

I really love this story! It's very original, update soon! X

I thought this chapter flowed perfectly and I couldn't see any mistakes. I was quite surprised by the discovery in this chapter but it was very good :)

You could call this 'What If'. It's not a very good idea but that's all I've got. Nice story regardless :)
(I usually do paragraph long reviews per chapter but I get the feeling it irritates some people so I thought I would ask what you'd like from me as a commenter first...?)