I really liked this. First of all, the picture in the layout is very pretty. I loved the whole structure of it; how you kept adding in quotes, which I presume were from a flashback of when the couple were still together, throughout the story, switching between the present and the past. I also liked the idea of how she felt as if he was there with her - how she kept hearing his voice and even feeling his touch. It gave the impression that she was going a bit insane without him. The language was really good, and it flowed really well, and I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes. The ending confused me slightly, simply because the story had been building up to imply that he had broken up with her or hadn't been in contact with her for years, but then we find out that he's dead, and I had to re-read that bit a couple of times. But maybe I'm just a bit slow. :) Overall, though, it was a very good story. :D
I really liked this. First of all, the picture in the layout is very pretty. I loved the whole structure of it; how you kept adding in quotes, which I presume were from a flashback of when the couple were still together, throughout the story, switching between the present and the past. I also liked the idea of how she felt as if he was there with her - how she kept hearing his voice and even feeling his touch. It gave the impression that she was going a bit insane without him. The language was really good, and it flowed really well, and I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes.
The ending confused me slightly, simply because the story had been building up to imply that he had broken up with her or hadn't been in contact with her for years, but then we find out that he's dead, and I had to re-read that bit a couple of times. But maybe I'm just a bit slow. :) Overall, though, it was a very good story. :D