My critique for the student/teacher contest. I love this, personally. You went above and beyond what I was asking for. You made real characters, real love, and real passion. It was well written too! Points breakdown Met word requirement 5 pt Have a date scene 15 pts Have a sex scene 20 pts Have a summary 8/10
Bonus for having a good scene, making your teacher sound hot, and making me want to subscribe even though its over.
I love this, personally. You went above and beyond what I was asking for. You made real characters, real love, and real passion. It was well written too!
Points breakdown
Met word requirement 5 pt
Have a date scene 15 pts
Have a sex scene 20 pts
Have a summary 8/10
Bonus for having a good scene, making your teacher sound hot, and making me want to subscribe even though its over.