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Comment swap brought me here! I love the layout! I love The Maine and John O! I especially love the way you set up your chapters by age! It's a great idea and a great way to tell your story! I did want to say reading the chapter involving the first time was pretty accurate, It's hard to come across a story that describes the first time the way you did. This story is so wonderful and cute, I wish you would continue updates! You're wonderful at writing!!

This is the cutest! Please update soon!

I seriously love this story! Please update soon! I'm excited to read what comes next for Johnny and Rosie :)

Omg awkxnwkc I love this story, how it doesn't need forced drama to be interesting, how their romance is not cheesy, that it seems like a real relationship, they growing old,... Oh, plus I have to say it's the first story I read that describes the truth about "the first time". I'm tired of reading fairytale versions for it, when everything is perfect. You actually said the truth: it doesn't feel good in the start, the boy sometimes doesn't know what to do and where to touch and last, but not least, there's no thing as reaching the clímax together when it's your first time (and if it happened to some girl, you are damn lucky) because you may not reach it at all! Haha thanks for this beautiful story and update, please.

Comment swap brought me here and I’m really glad it did. As soon as I saw how your chapters were laid out, I was really intrigued about your story. I love how you have the chapters with different ages, it reminds me a little bit of the movie/book One Day. You write really well and it makes me want to read more.Five year old John is just sooo adorable!!!

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I absolutely adore the idea of watching them grow older. It's a great way to show character development and how their emotions are being formed over time. Your descriptions are wonderful, it really brings the story to life. And, have I said how cute this is? Because it's really cute!
Great job!

Waaaaaah, this is just so adorable! John being so nervous and cute and just... I love it!

Aww love it! More please!!!

This is perfect!! Hopefully we'll get to see how their relationship progresses throughout the writing/producing of Pioneer? Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Aw this is so cuuuute!!!

gulaloosh x3 omg HAHA

loved this chapter! update soon please?

hey please update omg

I have to say that I really like the concept of this story, about them growing older and developing feelings for each other and whatnot. It's really cute, so far, and I can't wait to read more :)

Love itt!!! Update soon PLEEEAASEE!(:

PLEASE okay thanks

hi please update :--) :--) thank u

John's birthday!! Ahahaha I love this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next :)

>\\< ... i thought for a secound she was going to be at the party.... at least she kind of made it up to him lol

djksf so cuuute! love it!! update soon!