Playing for Keeps - Comments

Love this

lol Matt sounds like a whiny little kid and I don't think there's any way he's gonna be nice - he's too much of a horny little fucker for that

I had to smirk that she scared him when she pulled the gun on him - big tough man wasn't expecting her to get the drop on him :-)

Okay, so I tried to edit because I made a spelling mistake, and for some reason, my computer has wacked out and won't let me see my comment. Here's what I wrote, haha!

Headed here from comment swap. I'm not even gonna lie, Avenged Sevenfold are possibly one of my least favourite bands, so I'm reading this as an original fiction because I know literally nothing about the band.

I watch WAY to many police procedurals, so when I realized this was about an FBI agent, I nearly cried for joy. I love Nora already; she's cocky, she's slightly arrogant and she's completely awesome! You've written her really well, I really get a sense of the character within the first few paragraphs.

I like how you've got two different sides to the story through two different points-of-view, although I was slightly confused at first; there didn't seem to be any warnings that the view had changed, and it took me a moment to realise I was actually reading Destiny's view.

All in all, a well written story, with a good plotline behind it. Both characters stand well, if not ever so slightly polar opposites (like a few people, I'm unsure of how that plays out. I'll leave it for now though, it seems fine), and the writing stype is fabulous! Keep up the good work! :)

Headed here from comment swap. I'm not even gonna like, Avenged Sevenfold are possibly one of my least favourite bands, so I'm reading this as an original fiction because I know literally nothing about the band.

I watch WAY to many police procedurals, so when I realized this was about an FBI agent, I nearly cried for joy. I love Nora already; she's cocky, she's slightly arrogant and she's completely awesome! You've written her really well, I really get a sense of the character within the first few paragraphs.

I like how you've got two different sides to the story through two different points-of-view, although I was slightly confused at first; there didn't seem to be any warnings that the view had changed, and it took me a moment to realise I was actually reading Destiny's view.

All in all, a well written story, with a good plotline behind it. Both characters stand well, if not ever so slightly polar opposites (like a few people, I'm unsure of how that plays out. I'll leave it for now though, it seems fine), and the writing stype is fabulous! Keep up the good work! :)

ooh she kind of put her foot in her mouth didn't she but Zacky will be back - underneath that tough exterior he's nuts about her and I don't think he could stay away even if he wanted to

hope the move goes well - I just helped a friend move a couple of weeks ago and damn she had a lot of crap lol

Hey coming here from comment swap! :D

And I have to say that i... really liked it. It was something different, something I haven't really read before and it kept my attention, Keep up the good work.

I absolutely adore Avenged Sevenfold and when I saw that comment swap had handed me an Avenged Sevenfold fic as my first story of the day I jumped for joy!
I noticed that ZackyEffingVengeance was a co-author so that instantly told me that this story would be a great one!
I love the detailed description behind the characters in the summary. I think I'll grow to like Nora more because she sounds a lot like me, haha!
I really like how you interpret the lives of Avenged Sevenfold in a different way and especially as bad boys :]
I'll look forward to reading the rest! Keep up the good work :D

I don't usually read stories that aren'tz slash but this seems very interesting and well written. Also I love Avenged Sevenfold and your characters are really intersting. I personally like destiny a bit more but nora is tough and cool :D

This is interesting. Zacky Baker and Matt Sanders as the two main characters. Zacky's my favorite and Matt's my second favorite. I can definitely imagine them being drug dealers. Their bulky body build just suits the title. LOL!

This story is very interesting and both the authors are amazing. I love reading both Destiny and Nora's POV. I like Nora's character because she's like this tough woman and I like a tough woman character. Destiny is a lot like me. I hate violence and I mostly just try to stay out of anything dangerous. I'm not much of a risk taker.

I really would love to see where this story is going.

I don't usually read a story that isn't slash but this story is good. ^_^

Well, I kind of like the way I'm writing Destiny, so she's staying this way. She is now my character, and I'll write it the way I want too, I have my reasons and it goes with the plot I have in mind for her and Zacky.

it's well written and the plot is good but Destiny's almost too timid to pull this off, and Nora is probably too much of a bitch to be able to pull this off. With that mouth of hers she's liable to get her face shot off, unless Matt finds he has a liking for prickly females who keep cock blocking him lol

I really love this story!

Uhm, well that's kind of how I want Destiny to be. ._. I mean I'm the author? I don't exactly know how this is going to play out yet...

Could Zacky be lying? Nora's really obnoxious and Destiny's really shy. It actually kind of annoys me, and they're not even real people. xD

loving this so far and very well written. Subscribed and looking forward to reading more :-)

Wow. I'm loving this so far. I read the first chapter just now and I'm already hooked.
LOL I love stories where the guys are all bad and naughty. =D
I'm going to read more!

I can't wait to help write and finish this cowrite up :) it's actually pretty interesting, so i hope i do a good job c: I'll try updating it tonight. c:

I dunno, Nora seems a bit pushy :\
she's too hard on Destiny, she isn't in the bureau like Nora):
PLEASE UPDATE SOON THOUGH!
I'm curious as to see what happens next.

Love it. Destiny needs to grow some lady balls, be more like Nora.

Well she does not do good under pressure does she....