The Fae - Comments

  • warmaiden

    warmaiden (6085)

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    though the font is a bit hard for me to read (jeez, am i getting too old for that shit??), i must say this was a very interesting concept. unlike capheus i've never heard anything that's remotely close to "the fae"

    i do think there's an unspoken beauty to the fae's you speak of. their magic can live only if they're spoken of, but also, their thoughts of "foolishness" regarding mankinds ways. it seems from the beginning we've forgotten the outside beauties of the world & care more for resources that further our existence rather than the evolution of the world around us.

    very nice read!
    May 27th, 2017 at 11:04am
  • capheus

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    Ohh I was so excited to read this. I associate the word fae with the tv series called Lost Girl where there are supernatural creatures and all of them are Fae. It's pretty interesting.

    I really like the banner you used, it's so pretty and I feel as though the lantern reminds me of how I think I had read somewhere that people caught fireflies or fairies (in stories) and used them for light. I think it's just really pretty and cool.

    I love how you started every sentence except the last with the two words, the fae. One thing I really like seeing in stories is repetition, and you pulled it off very well. I was pretty impressed with how you related the fae with the world and how things die and all that, it was a good topic to use and you really did well with it. This might be my favorite drabble of yours!
    July 12th, 2013 at 07:56pm