Struggles - Comments

Poor Marcus :(
I think that his brother should take him to a hotel or something for a few days; just pack up and leave.
Of course, it would probably be bad for Marcus if he has to return but I really think he needs to get out of that house even if it's for a little while.

:'(

I'm not putting that out there just because. I really do feel like crying now. I know he's a fictional character but stuff like this just hits me so hard and I wish I could just go in there and hug him and make everything better. I want his dad to suffer just like Marcus is now. I want him to feel all the pain that he is causing his son to feel.

It seems strange to feel that for fictional characters but I guess if you do, then you feel stronger for the people who are actually going through this.

This story is really good. I like it.

The introduction does seem a bit...wordy. Maybe if you could leave some things to infer instead of just putting it all out there at once like we're learning a lesson.

I really don't like people who abuse other people "because they can". It makes me sick honestly. Well not literally but...yeah you get the point.

I'm so scared for him. I hope he does make it out alive. *subscribe*

So interesting, I'm curious about more :)
And yayyy I took the story's comment virignity! :P