this is really, really good. i really really wish you'd update! i love the whole plot line. it's intriguing. and it's nice that some of it's mysterious. because every story needs a little mystery! i'm really fascinated with olivia's character. she seems like a bad ass. but not the typical, cliche bad ass that you find in stories. you do a really good job with her and bringing all the other characters to life. and i desperately want to read more!
I feel like you're playing with my emotions...you put up a new chapter and I think you're back for good, but then you disappear again. I can't handle it! haha it was a great update though and I can't wait for the next one (even if I have to wait a long time).
I like this story a lot, and I'm sensing that it's going to get even better as the story unfolds. I hope you update more often because I'm completely in love with you and your work, most especially this one :-)
Okay...I'm starting to like Ella more. She and John just seem like complete opposites though. I have no clue what went on in the past but I'm dying to find out.