Uuh I get to be your first commentor! ^.^ Anyways, so this sounds really good so far, even though there isn't much to go on yet.. I'm more into longer chapters for future references, and I think this is the only time I'm going to mention it.. I think xD Other than that I think you should make a new layout for your story.. Like a layout only for this one story. Even though it's pretty shallow. Layout can mean a lot.. But it's just a suggestion and I'm mostly saying it, because I love seing people getting creative with them.. wow this comment is getting waaay too long.. x) ...Oh also I'm subscribing and I'm hoping for more of this story soon =)
January 14th, 2012 at 11:52pm