Comment swap brought me back to this little gem, and I couldn't be happier
I am still absolutely, unconditionally, irrevocably in love with this piece. I went back and read every chapter, and I fell in love with it all over again. This story makes me cry, laugh, and feel emotions that I didn't even know I had. This little diddy is amazing! -A
CAIN IS OKAY!!!!!!!!!! *heart starts beating again*. Phew! You really got me screaming at my computer there (I'm not even kidding). I was about to go storm into my computer and shake Cain awake if he had died, but he didn't and that led onto the cutest scene EVER! I was basically bathing in their cuteness, and how Cain was about to confess but didn't quite get to was... annoying, but nice :3 Those two are adorable no matter what, and I loved Logan's over-reacting state. He was just too cute for words! Well, enough about me fangirling your characters (you're probably so sick of it by now!). I love your writing style, it's just so nice to read and the grammar and spelling is awesome, which is nice :] AND I adore your plot thus far, and I can't wait to see how you continue this amazing story! Update soon?
I love this story so much. Did you use song titles as chapter titles? If you did it intentionally, that was genius! I love it. The story is really intriguing. I agree with AnnaRambo. Why Cain? You can't leave us readers hanging! This deserves a recommendation for sure. -A
I honestly love the story. I like the way it is written. I love how it goes between each character and tells their side and thoughts of the story. It is really interesting. I really need to know more. You can’t just leave the readers hanging like that. And I’m going to agree with rest of the others. Why Cain?
. .. ... .... ..... I think I just died. Oh god... CAIN! He had better be okay, I'll give him my organs if he needs 'em! That boy just has to live, he's too precious to Logan and they need each other so badly. They are the most amazing couple ever and nothing should ever keep them apart! But on a happy note, I LOVE XANDER :3 He is so funny and bubbly and just all-round loveable! One of my most favourite characters. I want to stuff him in my bag and take him home! And thank you sooo much for updating. Every time you update my night seems that much brighter ^_^
NO! CAIN!! NOOOOO! CAIN HAS TO BE OKAY, right?! Oh god, the last part of this chapter was terrifying :S It was incredible though, and the insight to Cain's feelings was beautiful, I'm glad he's finally realised he's in love :D NOW LOGAN HAS TO KNOW SO YOU CAN'T KILL OFF CAIN! Just realised, if Cain doesn't die he will still be in the hospital for a while.....what if Craig takes the opportunity to get to Logan?! NO! Logan's going to be devastated. I can't wait for the next chapter, thanks! <3
I like the plot idea its very cute c: Seems like you're doing something right, too, since you're pulling in so many readers and commenters. I don't read much slash, although I tolerate it and I really like the ideas you have for this story. good luck with the rest, and keep up the good work.