Train Wreck - Comments

  • All right. So sorry, for the delay in judging. Your one-shot was intense. I'm not normally a reader of second person point of view writing, but you managed to pull it off, and pull it off well. I enjoyed it. I felt that you got the feeling of hatred across so well and the I liked the fact that you used the given picture as your banner. Great job. Good luck. If you place you will receive a message.
    November 17th, 2011 at 04:16am