April 4th, 2012 at 06:47pm
Wow, this made me tear up. Chapter 6 was like a huge chapter for this story. It feels like we're following a patient who has cancer, like a documentary I mean. I even teared up as I read it. It does happen, Chemo doesn't have a 100% success rate. From what I've seen, people end up looking worse.
It actually kills not only the cancer cells, but also the ones that are supposed to be fighting the cancer. That's why sometimes people die faster. I know this because my mom's friend studied natural medicines or something in school.
It kills me that it spread to her leg, I have a feeling she's not gonna be able to make it.
Your writing is lovely, by the way. You have no grammar mistakes and the story is just calm. I like that he was listening to a song that related to what he was going through.
I've been subscribed to this story for some time now. Please keep updating. This is a keeper.
It's so touching =]