Can't Help It - Comments

I don't usually read smut, but I really enjoyed this. I loved watching their relationship develop and seeing how easy they were around each other. And most importantly, I loved that every bit of this was realistic - because I think that's important.

Great read. =)

well i officially adore this

too bad is only a 5 shot, this would make a killer full-length fic!

My critique for the student/teacher contest
Alright, so your sex scene blew my mind. No one else in this contest wrote a scene that good. And the way your story unfolded, it could almost happen if it weren't a student and teacher in real life. Props for making it so real!
Point break down
word requirement 5
date scene 15
summary 8
sex scene 20
Bonus points for making me want to subscribe even though its over, may I suggest a sequel! Making your teacher sound hot, having a fanfic, and an amazing sex scene!
Great job!

DUDE! I know this was just a five shot but I LOVED it! Your sex scenes are hot! I gotta bring myself to write mine as well as urs! lol

that. was. epic. soooooooooooo epic. omg. absolutely LOVED IT!!!