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  • AJ9

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    Christ on a bike! That was damn hot!! Wink Wink
    February 2nd, 2014 at 11:17am
  • ForeverRocking660

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    now that was som smut... hot damn
    February 2nd, 2014 at 05:07am
  • lulicassa

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    I had to read this.
    You're amazing, Marriah. Now I wanna read all your stories.
    February 2nd, 2014 at 04:59am
  • lulicassa

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    I had to read this.
    You're amazing, Marriah. Now I wanna read all your stories.
    February 2nd, 2014 at 04:59am
  • Rustie Vengeance

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    Totally diggin' Matt. And this oneshot. You did a fantastic job!
    December 29th, 2011 at 03:11am
  • Sue Saloio

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    I have to agree with everything else said above ^ ! That was awesome! Loved it <3
    October 27th, 2011 at 01:30am
  • M Shadows's Girl

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    U did an amazing job. That was really good
    October 10th, 2011 at 05:17am
  • kdennis9

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    That was fucking incredible. I call shenanigans on that being your first time because that was PERFECT!
    October 2nd, 2011 at 04:09pm
  • JustDuckie

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    oh. ape. shit. that. was. FUCKING AMAZING!
    October 2nd, 2011 at 06:47am
  • misfit_mandy

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    gotta love shads and his horse cock! Lmao loved the story =)
    September 27th, 2011 at 05:20pm
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    I am to giddy to even form a response.
    First timer? I call bullshit.
    You owe me a pair of undies, maybe some new ovaries while you're at it.
    September 27th, 2011 at 08:07am
  • HailMisery

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    My ovaries have been incinerated ^_^
    September 26th, 2011 at 07:55pm
  • majoji

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    Damn! That was good! Are you sure this is your first smut? ;) Nah, just kidding.
    Anyway, this was awesome!
    September 26th, 2011 at 05:13pm
  • BabySnowball

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    That was really good, it got me worked up alright :) Damn my boyfriend for being away right now :/

    I would happily read another Matt sex story from you ;)
    September 25th, 2011 at 04:46pm
  • youdiebeforeidisco

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    You're first time writing one of these .. HOLY CRAP WELL DONE> I would have thought you'd have done loads if you hadn't have said.That was very very good deary.
    September 23rd, 2011 at 10:03pm
  • J M Angel

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    it was good
    September 22nd, 2011 at 05:07pm
  • trishahhh

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    I loved it! It felt so real! I wish I was her! Haha
    September 22nd, 2011 at 11:16am
  • HeatherLH9007

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    I think for not having written a sex scene before you did a good job. I really think you did it justice lol. At least now you know if you ever wanted to incorporate sex into any of your stories you can do it, regardless of who it's between. I think the way you made the story plot worked for it. I think it's funny she was Jimmy's assistant. The way that played out was good. Maybe with this one shot you'll get inspiration to base a full length story off of it. Just an idea. Okay, so this was probably the most lame review ever but hey what was I supposed to say "The sex was good." haha. I really don't know how much this will help you but there you go. =)
    September 22nd, 2011 at 09:28am