How to Save a Life - Comments

This would be SO much better without these lines:

You know that emptiness feeling you get in your gut when you’re hungry?
You know that breaking in your heart after you just got dumped?
You know that suffocation when you’re trying to stop crying?

Imagine all of those feelings but instead of hunger you’re starving, instead of breaking your heart’s shattered, instead of crying you’re sobbing.

Otherwise, it's really good.

I think you should add something to the summary to let people know what it's about.

I actually don't know what to say about this because I really didn't understand what was going on... But I did love the first part. :)

This was sad. :(
It was good, but it was sad.