Why didn't you extend the story around the time before they met the doctor that would be cool. Also this was a good story.
May 24th, 2012 at 07:01pm
I'm normally not a huge fan of Rory/Amy, but I think this was really well-writeen and gave a really good insight into both of the characters, adding your own dimension to them. It was really original, and was written well with really good phrasings.
I loved the first paragraph, simply because it's so true and it's such a simple observation wrote down and it makes you think about how things have changed. I also thought the opening line was a brilliant start, especially because it used the words "magical device" for something that we don't consider magical. In the Doctor Who universe, magic is normally put with the TARDIS or something on another planet, so it was nice to see it applied to something every day, but really is quite extraordinary.
That day was the beginning of a friendship that was always a little more; at least, it was for Rory. As they grew, him and Amy certainly changed; Rory got a little less quiet but a lot more awkward and she got more popular (and less Scottish) with each grade that passed. But no matter how popular she got, Amy always had time for Rory, always had time for a night of pizza and a movie when they should have been studying. ~ I tried to pick a favourite sentence from here, but I just couldn't. I loved all of it, and the narrative voice is written really well. I think this was my favourite paragraph from it. The whole backstory of how Rory and Amy first met seemed really sweet, and very realistic and not too overly romantacisded, which is good.
I also really liked the ending, because it was sweet and kind of a happy ending, but it also had a tinge of sadness, but in the perfect balance. Again, really well done.
