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  • little motorkitty;

    little motorkitty; (630)

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    Why do you write such beautiful stories, why, why? This was so flawlessly perfect, so simple and to the point. I loved it. It captured the emotion exactly and portrayed it in words that I don't think anybody but you could write. The way it was set out fit perfectly with the tone of it, and the layount was so well woven in with the story, it was part of it and it was all so beautiful.
    We could have had forever, but you wouldn't
    find the time."
    ~ I loved this last line, the contradiction in it and how poetic and sad it is, but worded so well. This is just pure perfection, encapsulated in this tiny pocket of words. I adore it.
    October 11th, 2011 at 10:49pm