Would You Destroy Something Perfect, in Order to Make It Beautiful? - Comments

  • FrankJScott

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  • mrs.stiglitz4207

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    Omfg this story was amazing and sad and beautiful at the same time! Comment swap sent me here and I am so glad it did. I'm a huge lover of the joker I have a fanfic of his in the works and I love this story. Ill admit I hate how it ended but there can't only be happy endings. Thats not how life works. I hope you continue to write and have an amazing day!
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  • A7Xknifemaster

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    To start with, I've only read the first chapter of this so forgive me if anything I criticize has been changed.

    I don't like that there's so much talking. That is obviously something that needs to be done but a story is better when it has more detail and isn't all words spoken from the characters.

    And because there is so much talking and so little detail I can't actually say much about your writing. Other than, you did set up the plot nicely, leaving curiosity and what not. Some people that try usually ends up failing.

    So all in all, that's my advice is more detail.

    *Also I know you probably love your layout but it's kinda harsh on the eyes. Just so ya know.*
    May 5th, 2013 at 05:23am
  • lovesicklullabies

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    ohmygosh, this was so good! :) I really loved the ending! At first, I wasn't sure where it was going, but I really liked how unexpected it was. I'm definitely looking forward to reading other stories from you :)
    July 15th, 2012 at 12:28am
  • lovesicklullabies

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    ohmygosh, this was so good! :) I really loved the ending!
    July 15th, 2012 at 12:26am
  • s c o r p i o n ;;

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    I'm not sure if I want to read this because I'm not very into the superhero kind of thing, since I'm not a fan I don't have to say much :) but this was good, from what I see of the other comments here.
    July 14th, 2012 at 05:39pm
  • DeathsIssue6661

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    Awesome :D You should make another Joker story!
    March 8th, 2012 at 12:47am
  • wolfprincess1995

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    Sad but beautiful ending. I loved this story.
    December 4th, 2011 at 01:26am
  • Blessedelua

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    quite enjoyed it, and loved the ending, unhappy endings are always the best ones. You should consider writing another one!
    December 3rd, 2011 at 08:40am
  • Scarlet Fields

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    D'awwwww. They said the thing to eachother!!!!
    Yeah... This story is one of the ones on here thats my life, just saying.
    Cant wait for more! :D
    November 6th, 2011 at 02:41am
  • let's make believe.

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    LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! :D Can't wait for the next update!! *Subscribes*
    October 21st, 2011 at 07:27am
  • Scarlet Fields

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    YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Am I the only one that wanted to just sother Jack with hugs when he said he loved her? Hm? If so, I fell a little crazy.... But I'm SO HAPY that she's dumping Bruce and going with Jack, But I still cant tell if she loves Jack or not.... Cant wait for another update xD
    October 9th, 2011 at 08:43pm
  • Scarlet Fields

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    Hmmmmm.... I'm contemplating on a smiley face, or a sad face.
    I'm sorta glad her and bruce are together... but... you know my opinions (^)
    And I'm happy that she saw Jack again, but his response broke my heart!
    You're doing good by keeping me on the edge of my seat, wndering what will happen haha xD
    September 30th, 2011 at 05:52am
  • Scarlet Fields

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    Gahahhhhh. Stupid Batman. Why can she like Jack? Its obvious he likes her... alot. Yeah, I love the Joker a ton, so just .... do somehing to get them together! haha
    September 26th, 2011 at 04:14am
  • Jessii Tara;

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    Ah never mind I know where it's from now I like this update soon.
    September 25th, 2011 at 11:27pm
  • Jessii Tara;

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    What is the title from!?!! I recognize it from somewhere I just can't think of it!
    September 25th, 2011 at 11:25pm
  • Scarlet Fields

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    Hope you update again today(:
    Its really good!
    September 25th, 2011 at 07:07pm
  • risky2business

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    Yaya!!!! This was sooo great! I am looking forward to seeing more! :D
    September 25th, 2011 at 06:27am
  • Scarlet Fields

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    Ok. I really like this. I can tell that it will be one of my favorite Joker stories on here.
    I cant wait for more (:
    And you can bet your butt I'm subscribing xD
    September 25th, 2011 at 05:09am