The Many Tales of Dujo - Comments

:O This is totally awesome! :D

This is so awesome and I love the layout! Update soon! *Subs*

Sorry I don't have more but I really like this!

the second chapter made me giggle.

the whole conversation bit, it was cute.
this first part of the chapter had me thinking it would be a dark conversation, but it was goofy<3 I loved it:D

can i join? i have something i REALLY WANNA enter..

I loved the prologue so much. I can't wait to read the rest of this story, really. I think it's a wonderful concept and I can't wait to see where you all take this story! :D

Prologue =Jesus. Why am I not a co-author? D:< i have the cool leprechaun theory remember!

I'm amazed that close-minded children will only cling to one thing said within a whole comment of criticism. I didn't JUST bash it, I gave reasons as to voice my opinion. And IN my opinion, it IS stupid, and I have the RIGHT to state just as so. I could have just said completely rude things without real point. Did I? No. I gave logical reasons to back up what I said. You cannot say I was just bashing and bashing alone. Proof of this is quite simply the fact that you ignored every bit of my comment except for the word "Stupid". I'm actually QUITE disappointed in you, Mibba Users. Since when does criticism mean kissing someone's butt?

Wow, this is really good for such a short little chapter. =)
I like all the detail you added, and how it felt so real. It reminds me of my story a little bit where I start off with a babysitters telling the little girl a story. I'm guessing the next chapter we'll jump into the story, right? I'll be waiting for your next update! =)

Ahhh, this is great :) I am so subscribing. I really liked the intro bit but I'm dying for the rest :D
And regarding the basher... I did see the Time Lord bit and thought of Doctor Who. I'm not sure if you were going for that or not, but either way... I personally thought it was great and kind of did a little cheer.

Dujo would make an epic Time Lord.

It's wonderful!
I'm subscribing.

I can't help but smile.
Can't wait to see what's coming up!

(Obviously that comment at the beginning was for the user above Isadora. XD)

^ "Criticism"? That's bashing, and it will get you banned.
Ahem!
Moving on!

I absolutely love the concept of this. it makes Dujo seem so awesome, and almost like a superhero. :3
He goes by many names and just like night and day, he comes and goes.
Seriously, that.... Just gave me total, comlete chills. You and artsy writing, madam, will be the death of me.
In a good way. ;3

The use of the words "coarse" and "withered" add so much more interest than just saying "old" and "wrinkled".
Again, chills. You are giving me chills.

This is all so many interesting! :O
“You have chosen a very good book to read, child. For this is about the legendary creator, our leader, Dujo, who had created this wonderful kingdom of Mibba.” The old woman said quietly and it was then that the stories began with the little girl listening with much interest.
It's almost as if I get the feeling that Dujo started Mibba online and it became an actual place.
I don't know if that's where it's actually going to go, but I do know one thing...

I'm subscribing! :D

^ That's rude. Calling someone's work stupid is just stepping over the line of what's okay as far as criticism goes.

Yeah, I hate to be so cruel but... this is just stupid. Not only did you rip off Doctor Who, but you did it with poor taste. If you're going to make a story about a guy you know very little of, can you at least use originality infused with it seeing as you have so much to play with? Why are you ripping other people off with their creative works and trying to make it your own?

If you are going to continue this story, I suggest you actually do a better job next time. Thank you for reading my comment. I hope the criticism helps.

For some reason, the prologue made me laugh. I love the idea of the tale of mibba being a story that is told to young children. And, as I've already said before, this is a completely wonderful idea! I am totally subscribing!

I'm smiling:) The whole first chapter I spent smiling:) You just can't hate on this. :) I found no errors and this is just soo.....entertaining! xD I loved it. I love the idea. I feel like when I read more I'll enter this magically place xD I like the "Gramma" reading the tale because it just makes it feel more enchanting:) Can't wait to see where this goes.

The first chapter was quite the prologue. I can't wait for more! I wish I were part of it :D -jealous-

This is so cool!

This is such an awesome idea.

If you're still looking for writers I'd love to write a tale. XD

But if you have enough I'll be fine as a subscriber and commenter. :D

I actually like the layout the way it is and the banner is cute xD

The prologue is adorable! I'm excited for this<333

I'm def subbing<3

Expect further comments from me!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AMAZING!!! I love the layout, and I LOVED the prologue! The way you wrote it was absolutely perfect!

=] I can't wait to see what ya'll come up with!