I think Gerad's laughter was really well thought out, I liked your reasoning, the emotions behind it, the almost lack of control, it was a great reaction. Mikey let slip! Such a silly boy... I really am enjoying Mikey's recurring theme of running away and listening to music lol. Frank is such a sweetheart, and perhaps too naive and trusting for his own good... Is it bad that however much I want romance to blossom between the pair so as Frank can help Gerard out with his 'demon' I kind of want to see Gerard go all psycho and kill Frank, lol. Just to see how he'd do it of course, and the emotional aftermath, not just because I want to see someone bumped off again... Although I wouldn't say np to another murder...
Haha Frank is such a sweetheart going all that way just to warn them, bless his little cotton socks! And he finally knows a bit of truth about Gerard and all the dark and dangerous things he is capable of! What will he do with this information? Will he be able to peice it all together or will he play dumb?
How very intriguing! His erratic behaviour would suggest madness, definitely, yet this character you've created for the 'demon' is very intriguing indeed. I'm still not sure. Although, after that rather tellingly gruesome yet wholly wonderful murder scene, I can't help but fell like I should be rooting for this 'demon' lol.
Can't spell slaughter without laughter is the joker in the Nolan films, and the yove got red on you is from shaun of the dead; said by both his colleague and step dad when he gets red ink on his shirt at work. Fuck yeah.
This chapter was a bit dark don't you think? Bit more dramatic than I was expecting lol!
Excellent :3