Don't Leave Me Alone in This Bed - Comments

Please continue! I love Framing Hanley and can never really find stories. I cant wait to read more!

Ive been dying for a Framing Hanley story. Keep writing<3 Its good so far

Thanks :) I thought about doing that so I will probably go redo some of it. I'm going to work on it tomorrow so please keep looking for me to do that!! I really appreciate your idea!!!!! :)

So I was really excited when I saw that you asked me to read this, as not many people do that. I like the story idea, but I feel like you rushed the story a bit too much. Maybe you could have written more about Kyra and Nixon, like building up the relationship in multiple chapters instead of having them get together right away. I dont know about other people, but personally I like it when theres a build up that leaves you haning, leaves you wanting more. I also feel that you could have done a bit more character development on Kyra. I really do think this story has a lot of potential, but just needs to be tweaked.

I haven't been posting much but I shall be posting tonight!!

I. Fucking. Love. This. Story. <3

Oooohh me likey! Framing Hanley is amaaaaazinnngggg! Keep writing!!