Don't Leave Me Alone in This Bed - Comments

  • SilentScreaming

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    Please continue! I love Framing Hanley and can never really find stories. I cant wait to read more! Smile
    July 21st, 2012 at 06:52am
  • coiledXillusions

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    Ive been dying for a Framing Hanley story. Keep writing<3 Its good so far
    March 16th, 2012 at 05:46am
  • XDarlingDefianceX

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    Thanks :) I thought about doing that so I will probably go redo some of it. I'm going to work on it tomorrow so please keep looking for me to do that!! I really appreciate your idea!!!!! :)
    December 3rd, 2011 at 12:48am
  • Arabella-

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    So I was really excited when I saw that you asked me to read this, as not many people do that. I like the story idea, but I feel like you rushed the story a bit too much. Maybe you could have written more about Kyra and Nixon, like building up the relationship in multiple chapters instead of having them get together right away. I dont know about other people, but personally I like it when theres a build up that leaves you haning, leaves you wanting more. I also feel that you could have done a bit more character development on Kyra. I really do think this story has a lot of potential, but just needs to be tweaked.
    December 2nd, 2011 at 01:53am
  • XDarlingDefianceX

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    I haven't been posting much but I shall be posting tonight!!
    November 15th, 2011 at 08:48pm
  • I is Dinosaur! RAWR!

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    I. Fucking. Love. This. Story. <3
    October 12th, 2011 at 08:16am
  • lmoss88

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    Oooohh me likey! Framing Hanley is amaaaaazinnngggg! Keep writing!!
    October 1st, 2011 at 10:29am