I really like this a lot. I love the bittersweet sort of vibe you've captured in it; the descriptions were just perfect for it He can hear the laugh in Patrick's voice and it makes something inside of him flinch. Makes him miss long roads and long nights and scars and stories. -I saw this excerpt in the description, and it pulled me in instantly. I love the sort of longing nostalgia behind it, and it kind of makes me feel the same way. Pete misses the summer -I love this as the ending. It's got the perfect feel, like it summarizes the whole piece so simply. Also, I love how it ends like it begins. That simple thought that bookends the work just captures the perfect mood; I just really like it.
Yeah, all in all, I really enjoyed reading this. :)
He can hear the laugh in Patrick's voice and it makes something inside of him flinch. Makes him miss long roads and long nights and scars and stories.
-I saw this excerpt in the description, and it pulled me in instantly. I love the sort of longing nostalgia behind it, and it kind of makes me feel the same way.
Pete misses the summer
-I love this as the ending. It's got the perfect feel, like it summarizes the whole piece so simply. Also, I love how it ends like it begins. That simple thought that bookends the work just captures the perfect mood; I just really like it.
Yeah, all in all, I really enjoyed reading this. :)