Finally judging this contest, I apologize for the delay. :s
First, the layout was simple but nice. Although, it was a bit difficult to read. Second, I really liked what you did with this story, I would really like to read more because this left me with a lot of unanswered questions but I think that this was the point. It was beautiful. Third, you have a wonderful way with words. The details were very nice and the way you described the girl was amazing. I very much like your writing.
First, the layout was simple but nice. Although, it was a bit difficult to read.
Second, I really liked what you did with this story, I would really like to read more because this left me with a lot of unanswered questions but I think that this was the point. It was beautiful.
Third, you have a wonderful way with words. The details were very nice and the way you described the girl was amazing. I very much like your writing.
Wonderful job. <3