Pretty, Ugly Girl - Comments

  • Hammerwood

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    Hi, i just recently finished the story and it saddens me to see few comments on here, well, im ADD ONE!

    this story is just omg. its so, detailed. i love the mood i receive from your writing and i love the journal entry every 10 chapters. its seriously amazing. i will be sure to read more of your writing. this is seriously one of the most realistic, detailed, and emotional stories ive read. like, this could be a book. or a movie!

    please write more. =D
    October 27th, 2013 at 03:58am
  • tealeaves

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    subscribibg just at the cool picture:) i've read it aswell how cool is this! its amazing :)
    November 30th, 2011 at 05:26pm
  • sunnyshowers

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    i still love this story. its amazing! one of my favorites i think.
    November 27th, 2011 at 09:33pm
  • sunnyshowers

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    cool story. its very interesting. update soon please :)
    November 21st, 2011 at 04:06am
  • northern lights;

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    Okay so one, why are there no comments on this? :( Unless you want no comments...BUT TOUGH LUCK YOU'RE GETTING ONE ANYWAY.

    SO THIS IDEA IS JUST AMAZING AND I'M SO EXCITED FOR THIS AND I LOVE IT AND UM YEAH =D

    But seriously, I love the way you write, and I feel the diary entry thing each ten chapters is super clever. You probably don't want to hear this but I don't like Abi because right now she sounds like a bitch :') Buut the end of the last chapter sounds promising because it shows why she is what she is and something will be done about it. I'm so excited to find out what happens!

    I love the last line as well : Hook, line and reel.
    I did notice some grammar mistakes, but they're tiny and its for nano so you can edit them. If I had time I'd point them out so I will next time I comment =D

    So basically I have a message to this story:
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    PLUS HOW CAN YOU BE OVER 10K ALREADY!? WAAH YOU MAKE ME FEEL LIKE A FAILURE
    November 3rd, 2011 at 11:11pm