Mmm so I just read this whole story. I think it's fucking amazing. It's entertaining and funny, yet serious at the right times. I loved the relationship between the two brothers. Their quarrels were entertaining to read about. I think this is a great, original story, and I look forward to you hopefully posting other good stories as well so that I can read them and comment them too. :]
I really love the ending to this awesome story! I'm so glad that Gerard proved his parents wrong and over the fact that Mikey defended his brother. And Gerard and Frank being together is so cute!
I really liked how Mikey told his brother that he looks stupid, as a last sentence in story. That really made me laugh!
To be honest I actually loved it (: but since I don't make any sense I didn't suscribe since the beginning still, I waited for each chapter and loved the ending. I can actually relate to the way Gerard's parents treated him, because I'm in the same position, but he just proved them wrong in the coolest way possible. Sad to see it end but it was really good, bye (:
I honestly don't remember if I've ever commented this before, but I've been a subscriber from the beginning and I have to say, it's a brilliant story. I love how the end shows that some things just stay the same and it's a nice way to tie the story together and yay I love you and you're talented and yay.
=D That all made no sense but I hope you get what i'm trying to say.
wow high acheiver gerard. im going too miss this story, sorry for not commenting as much as your awesomeness truly deserves, would the excuse "im a bitch when i dont have sugar" sufice? if not then my excuse is "im very stupid" but really truly, it was such a cute ending. thats got to e the greatest way to end a story like that Mikey looked him over once, smiled, nodded, then stopped and frowned, deeply considering what he wanted to say. “You look stupid.” genious. absolute genious. good work, i cant wait for your next story.
That was such a realistic ending. :tehe: I loved the mood you left off at. I'm so glad that Gerard got justice and his parents were put in their place, but not in a way that broke the family apart. It was very nicely done.
awww i'm sad that it's over, but i liked your story sooo much! (even though mikey was a prick.) the last chapter was intensely fantastic, and i absolutely LOVED the last line. yay =]
IT'S OVER!! *Starts crying and jumping up and down* Now I'm sad because your ending it. It was really good though and I really ejoyed reading it. And I beleive this is yours *hands you 10 packs of skittles*. One for every chapter. I just wish I could really give you some. Awesome story!!!!
Hehe.. I liked your story. A LOT. I liked the way you build up the characters and presented the scenes. I cracked up a few times :) The dialogues were so... creative. Yet genuine. It was QUALITY TIME to read this. Specially when I was boring shitless in front of my computer and couldn't find something that actually caught my attention. ...It encouraged me to comment. Usually I don't (which is cruel, I know) but this got me in the 'commenting' mood... Really loved it. Great, GREAT, gReAt story. Too bad it's over. But definitely made my evening. Keep on writing, bye. ...
That was the most perfect ending to this story that anyone could have asked for! Seriously, I just loved the part when Gerard's parent's found out about his scholarship.. the fact that they'd been ranting at him for being stupid, and not caring, just made it even better :D
I just lurved it... And it ended on such a great note, too