Fun ways to get back at your brother - Comments

  • leaderoftheunwanted

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    Ha ha, that was in fact THE SHIT! You should write more often, you're really good.
    March 31st, 2009 at 06:16am
  • Ashlee Rose.

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    Mmm so I just read this whole story. I think it's fucking amazing. It's entertaining and funny, yet serious at the right times. I loved the relationship between the two brothers. Their quarrels were entertaining to read about. I think this is a great, original story, and I look forward to you hopefully posting other good stories as well so that I can read them and comment them too.
    :]
    July 31st, 2008 at 01:10am
  • Alice Verney

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    amazing update good thing they finally saw the light
    July 28th, 2008 at 06:37pm
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    Awesoem update, it was a really good ending.
    July 14th, 2008 at 03:16am
  • DontEatMyCherries

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    I really love the ending to this awesome story!
    I'm so glad that Gerard proved his parents wrong
    and over the fact that Mikey defended his brother.
    And Gerard and Frank being together is so cute!

    I really liked how Mikey told his brother that he looks
    stupid, as a last sentence in story. That really made
    me laugh!

    Great story! <3
    July 12th, 2008 at 01:58am
  • Nightfire_...

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    To be honest I actually loved it (:
    but since I don't make any sense I didn't suscribe since
    the beginning
    still, I waited for each chapter and loved the ending.
    I can actually relate to the way Gerard's parents treated him,
    because I'm in the same position, but he just proved them
    wrong in the coolest way possible.
    Sad to see it end but it was really good,
    bye (:
    July 10th, 2008 at 06:35am
  • bellevillexx

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    I honestly don't remember if I've ever commented this before, but I've been a subscriber from the beginning and I have to say, it's a brilliant story. I love how the end shows that some things just stay the same and it's a nice way to tie the story together and yay I love you and you're talented and yay.

    =D
    That all made no sense but I hope you get what i'm trying to say.
    July 9th, 2008 at 07:40am
  • Sticky Tape

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    wow high acheiver gerard. im going too miss this story, sorry for not commenting as much as your awesomeness truly deserves, would the excuse "im a bitch when i dont have sugar" sufice? if not then my excuse is "im very stupid"
    but really truly, it was such a cute ending. thats got to e the greatest way to end a story like that Mikey looked him over once, smiled, nodded, then stopped and frowned, deeply considering what he wanted to say. “You look stupid.”
    genious. absolute genious. good work, i cant wait for your next story.
    July 8th, 2008 at 02:40pm
  • all for believing.

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    That was such a realistic ending. :tehe:
    I loved the mood you left off at.
    I'm so glad that Gerard got justice and his parents were put in their place, but not in a way that broke the family apart.
    It was very nicely done. Yes
    July 8th, 2008 at 07:10am
  • LoveLikeFire

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    awww i'm sad that it's over, but i liked your story sooo much! (even though mikey was a prick.)
    the last chapter was intensely fantastic, and i absolutely LOVED the last line.
    yay =]
    July 6th, 2008 at 10:36pm
  • livinglie13

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    IT'S OVER!! *Starts crying and jumping up and down* Now I'm sad because your ending it. It was really good though and I really ejoyed reading it. And I beleive this is yours *hands you 10 packs of skittles*. One for every chapter. I just wish I could really give you some. Awesome story!!!!
    July 5th, 2008 at 10:46am
  • Bitter Love.

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    Hehe.. I liked your story. A LOT.
    I liked the way you build up the characters and presented the scenes. I cracked up a few times :)
    The dialogues were so... creative. Yet genuine. It was QUALITY TIME to read this. Specially when I was boring shitless in front of my computer and couldn't find something that actually caught my attention.
    ...It encouraged me to comment. Usually I don't (which is cruel, I know) but this got me in the 'commenting' mood... Really loved it.
    Great, GREAT, gReAt story. Too bad it's over.
    But definitely made my evening.
    Keep on writing, bye.
    ...
    July 5th, 2008 at 12:34am
  • Angelus.

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    That was the most perfect ending to this story that anyone could have asked for!
    Seriously, I just loved the part when Gerard's parent's found out about his scholarship.. the fact that they'd been ranting at him for being stupid, and not caring, just made it even better :D

    I just lurved it... And it ended on such a great note, too Clap

    *cough* sequel *cough*

    xoxoxox
    July 4th, 2008 at 08:17pm
  • dead!insomniaque

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    That was a really perfect ending. I loved how Mikey and Gerard's first argument made an appearence at the end.
    July 4th, 2008 at 07:20pm
  • Vanya Hargreeves.

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    Aww, that's awesome! I love a happy ending.

    Bless Gerard, it's so good to read a story where he's not a fucking idiot. XD
    I'll miss this story,
    xoxo
    Zanna
    July 4th, 2008 at 04:29pm
  • pixie_emochick18

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    OMG YAY...
    O_O

    Uhmmm I like it? xxDDD
    July 4th, 2008 at 02:48pm
  • bombcel

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    i really enjoy reading your story. . i had fun and i love the way you ended it. .i will wait for another story of yours. .
    July 4th, 2008 at 02:26pm
  • LettersFromGod

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    The ending line was just classic XD
    I really enjoyed this fabulous story =)

    -haute couture
    July 4th, 2008 at 02:13pm
  • SherriLianne

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    Terrific story!! =]

    I love it.
    Loved reading it.

    Sequel ?
    XD

    x.x.x.
    July 4th, 2008 at 01:35pm
  • DontEatMyCherries

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    ROTFL! Go Mikey! XD

    I wonder what their dad want...

    Amazing update! XD Love it!
    June 8th, 2008 at 07:14pm