This is such an amazing piece. Sure, it is extremely creepy, and all you really want to do is punch that step-brother in the face, but it was written so well. Your plot line was simple, but it never felt like it was moving too fast. I really loved your two main characters, too. I wish that they could have ended up together! Your writing style is really different, but I love how you make it work so well. Great job!
November 26th, 2011 at 06:42pm