so props to you for being the first one with an entry! First of all the thing that I like the best was that there was a lot of description in your words and that the paragraphs were nicely done, as in they weren't too short and they weren't horribly long either. I really enjoyed this! You wrote the sexy scenes well too and I couldn't help but feel cock-blocked when Fun just moved away T_T haha, but you did very well on this, and you might not have that much competition since half of the people dropped out =P
First of all the thing that I like the best was that there was a lot of description in your words and that the paragraphs were nicely done, as in they weren't too short and they weren't horribly long either.
I really enjoyed this! You wrote the sexy scenes well too and I couldn't help but feel cock-blocked when Fun just moved away T_T
haha, but you did very well on this, and you might not have that much competition since half of the people dropped out =P