October 16th, 2011 at 09:15pm
no. no. no. this is...
oh my goodness. this story was awesome. okay? okay. I loved it. you described everything so perfectly and the imagery was impeccable. ;3
I absolutely loved this story. might I suggest writing a sequel to it? I'd love to read a sequel, actually. keep me posted and let me know if you ever do!
great work, and good luck in the contest. I think you'll do just fine. c:
kidding.
but yeah, this was hot.
everything was great.
and...detailed.
loved it c: