Alexithymia - Comments

Elijah is a punk. A punk who stays in his own head too much. Emery is a punk too. All of your characters are punks. A bunch of feel-sorry-for-themselves punks. COMMUNICATION, PEOPLE.

When I first started reading this I thought "This looks like it's going to be good" and then I was like "I was so wrong" This story isn't good, it's GREAT

I recently have fallen across this story, and though, I do enjoy it the constant mistakes in grammar do tend to be irritating after a while. I am not meaning to seem negative, but you may want to either get someone to proof read for you, or read through your chapters before posting them for any spelling and/or grammatical issues that seem to occur. Overall, however, I do enjoy this story, wholeheartedly. I cannot wait to see where it ends up.

I'm so sorry I haven't read/commented in forever, you're story totally slipped my mind until recently! It's fantastic, it really is. I love the way you write for Emery, it's so beautiful. I also love that there is a clear difference in your writing style when you switch point of views. It's fantastic! I promise to be more of a regular reader! Sorry again.

What are you doing to me? AND WHY. This is just tragic! Poor baby! And Mason stepping up like that? Also amazing. Also, please don;t make him hate himself too badly. We all know he doesn't deserve it and personally, I don't know if I can take it. Not from him! Plus, Elijah needs him and they deserve each other and I refuse to believe that you would hurt them both like that.

GAH my heart is full of weeps, that was beautiful! And I just got all caught up and yes yes this was lovely.

Poor Em :(
I've always liked Mason but now I like him more.
Have I ever toold you that I love that bunny picture a lot? Though I think it'd make more sense for that to be a picture of a kitten covering its face.

"The thought would have made me confused if it hadn't left me with such rapturous happiness that it permitted no longevity of any other emotion." I liked this sentence. I don't know why.
Leif is making me angry. I don't think he's doing what's best for Emery. He just seems like a dick right now. Does he like Em or something?
On to chapter 15!

"...murf" bahahahahahaha!

New reader here :) Ive spent about the past hour reading. Got to chapter 11 and had to comment becuase it made me laugh so hard. I love Ja'Kyron and his swag XD
I'll finish reading now. Really it's very entertaining, I like how the chapters are long, and your writing is very descriptive.
Don't know why this isnt getting more attention.

I fucking love Mason. Have I ever mentioned that? I mean, Lief was being a douche and Mason just like, bitch slapped him back into his place....kinda. You know what I mean. I'm glad Emery seems to have gotten over his doubt. I mean, taking the initiative to hold Eli's hand? And he's back to shouting! That's always good, right? Haa. But Lief really did make me mad in this chapter. Jeez. Could he BE any more obnoxious and over-the-edge- protective? AWH NOW I MISS LIEF HANDCOCK. YOU ASSHOLE.

I've never actually bothered to comment on this story, but I'd like to take time to say it's one of my very favorites and Im astounded that it doesn't have more feedback than this. I've been with the story since the beginning and although I am not patient enough, usually, for slow updates, I've wholeheartedly stuck to this one because every single time I read an update, it reminds me why I'm so in love with your writing and why I adore these odd boys so much! plus, you're chapters are usually incredibly long and so with slow updates comes a hell of a chapter and I don't mind waiting so much :) seriously never quit on this story because the description is absolutely beautiful!

Fuck you. That's all I have to say. I mean, yeah, you warned me but damn. Leif is just an asshole. I like Leif! But not this one! This one is a jerkface who doesn't like seeing his fried happy. I just don't get why he would do this.

I already read this so this'll be short.
Emery and Elijah are perfect together.
Eli is such a sweetheart. I can't wait till he punches the ducher in the face. That's gonna happen right...?

My gawd woman! I'm so happy, love this story! Keep writing!

Woahwoahwoah. THIS is your favorite story! I'm very offended little sister.
I think you should have update days. So much easier. That way, you always have something to update. Until the end. You know. 

I am, once again, going to quote your chapter to you ;)

Taking a deep breath, I attempted and failed to gather myself once more. This was all too unctuous to me. ".....Murf." Uhm. Excuse me. What does Murf mean? Haa.

He smiled, writing something down and handing the paper back. 'I know, I just wanted written consent too. You know, to make sure you really said yes and I'm not daydreaming. Don’t laugh. So, will you go on a date with me?' WHY DOES THIS MAKE HIM SOUND LIKE SUCH A CREEPER? I mean, written consent? Weirdo. 

But yeah, anyway. I do get that something happened to him, but I don't get what happened. Either you haven't said yet or I'm oblivious or you're too subtle. Either way, the information remains unknown.

I like how most of that ^^ comment was your story quoted back at you ;)

Yes, your chapters are too long. That's the only reason I didn't read this sooner. But I still liked it either way :) Here are a couple reasons why.

1) "Fucking swagger! Swagger like you are the last fucking swag master on the fucking planet of fucking swag in the fucking capital of fucking swagington swag swag!" -> What the hell is wrong with him?! Yeah. That's why you don't ask black people to do stuff. Fucking shit.

2) "I want to ask him out, not train him to be my ass-slut!"

"You do? Why didn't you tell me! We've been doing it all wrong!" -> Uhm. Why was this even a possibility of what he meant at all?? Your problems are a little more weird than I thought. But dude, still funny

3) I'd need to 'swag out' my swag so I could be a 'fucking swaging swager'. Because, according to my brain damaged cousin, no one can resist a swaging swager. -> . . . What? 

Yeah. That's pretty much the gist. I like how they're getting closer and more comfortable around each other. Elijah's a little obsessed though ad it's a little creepy but it's mostly cute. But still creepy. And my heart just sank toward the end when he heard Emery getting yelled at :(
And okay, his reasoning for not listening to music doesn't make sense. AND OKAY LOVE?!

My dear God, I love this story...Emery didn't shout in the last part! I was so happy!!! I squealed with joy...this is so cut, I love it, I love you. Keep writing, you epic human being. Also, I really like the swag portion, it was hilarious.

Daisy is a bitch. Let me just say that right now. I hate that she's put on a pedestal. I just don't get it! NOTHING gives her the right to be such a jackass! It pisses me off. God damn you. Lea is delightfully embarrassing. It's funny but damn. Emery needs to stop his thoughts of self destruction. Being gay isn't bad at all. Duh. It's almost sickening how much his thinking differs from Elijah's. I'm glad he knows that he's gay too now....
Stop using big words! I almost got a dictionary, god fucking dammit. Aaaaand there goes Emery screaming agin. Poor boy :(

 Tila looks a lot younger than the other two, just saying. Bite me.
And if you don't like my comments ten ill just stop commenting. Jerk.