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  • I am Cheese! :3

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    Baby this story is great from what I've read :] I love the plot-line. I will read more when I get the chance. You are a great writer sweetie. Bravo :3
    January 29th, 2012 at 06:50am
  • Irbisfreak

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    Oh but Frank should apologize anyway C:
    January 27th, 2012 at 09:59pm
  • Irbisfreak

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    Whoa sudden end! O.o glad Gee said yes C:
    January 27th, 2012 at 09:58pm
  • Irbisfreak

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    WTF Frank...? I understand that he gets angry, but...D: it's too much I suppose... :'( poor Gee, I hope it gets better soon :) and running away is never the answer :)
    January 26th, 2012 at 10:19am
  • Irbisfreak

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    Lol lindsey is getting her hopes up tho she has no chances C: I hope she hasnt ;)
    January 20th, 2012 at 11:51pm
  • RainbowsEnd

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    ............
    I looooove it :)
    January 20th, 2012 at 12:25am
  • Irbisfreak

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    LOL so short O.o :< wanna more
    January 11th, 2012 at 08:52pm
  • Irbisfreak

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    C: as you wanted :p
    Oh, school! Right! :))) I wonder what happens O.o
    January 8th, 2012 at 11:17pm
  • PurpleLighter1

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    High school. Yay. *note sarcasm*
    I bet you there will be some assy homophobic jocks
    January 7th, 2012 at 10:03pm
  • Frankie Ro.

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    My comment got you to the 6th page! Yaaaay!
    January 7th, 2012 at 09:56pm
  • Frankie Ro.

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    Oh and:

    :D

    Because you said you didn't mind if the comment was just a smiley.
    This turned out to be more than a smiley though. I fail
    January 7th, 2012 at 09:55pm
  • Frankie Ro.

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    Oooh Frerardiness ;)
    You're talented, don't let the lack of stars bring you down.
    This story is great <3
    January 7th, 2012 at 09:54pm
  • Irbisfreak

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    Aww don't worry about the stars! They tend to be malignant :/// mm I liked sexy time :DDD it was adorable somehow :>>>
    January 5th, 2012 at 07:39am
  • Sapphire Sky

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    I take full credit for the sex scene. It was pretty hot right? haha. No need to thank me. :P
    I had fun writing it.
    But, even though, I did half of the chapter, I still loved it. I need an update. <3
    January 5th, 2012 at 12:37am
  • Irbisfreak

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    They kissed eventually and I wanna next chapter :}
    January 3rd, 2012 at 08:45am
  • Dear? Drop Dead.

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    I looooooooove <3
    January 3rd, 2012 at 02:40am
  • We Make Birds Sing

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    You're writing style is pretty cool :) have only read a couple of chapters so far but apart from grammar leaving a little something to be desired it's good. You kinda like, keep the reader interested and you have a pretty decent vocabulary :) its good. The plots strong and from what I can tell you have layouts and paragraphing ect. sussed. I like it xD
    January 3rd, 2012 at 12:45am
  • Irbisfreak

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    LOL fluff! :))) I would ask why Frank's parents pay Gee for working in their garden, though they are letting him stay (it's pretty big favor) but I'm not an ass :)I liked it, really cute :)
    January 1st, 2012 at 11:10pm
  • Sapphire Sky

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    What the hell? I thought this story was pregnant with my baby?! So not cool. *pouts*

    BUTTTT! I am loving these updates, they are making me happy. :D
    Seeing you update all the time makes me look lazy when it comes to my stories lmao.
    January 1st, 2012 at 10:52pm
  • Dear? Drop Dead.

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    LOVE,
    YOUR BABY MOMMA (:
    January 1st, 2012 at 10:14pm
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