Coffee and Cigarettes - Comments

Wow, this is seriously addictive. And so nicely written too.

If there was more of this in the near future I think I would be a happy person.

I like the new title, I think it fits the story well.
Also I love that Oliver can read Shea so easily, and just yeah, this story in general.

We likes the picture. :)

So since it's been a while I had to re-read the from the beginning but I was definitely not disappointed as I got to become enthralled with your writings all over again, which is never a bad thing, haha. c:

Again, I totally adore who Shea acts out most of the time on impulse and that subconscious need for attention, and while most other people just write him off at face value and roll their eyes at his antics, I love how Oliver is one of the people that despite barely knowing him already can just pierce through that facade. Their chemistry is just amazing, and not forced or anything like when someone drops two people in a story and are like THEY'RE TOGETHER, I mean they're barely passing the stranger stage and already the dynamic between them is just soooo perfect. :3

Especially when Shea was all getting jealous and whatnot, whether he admits it or not he is just the cutest thing ever honestly with everything he does I'm just like I want to hug you so much right now. Oliver too, I love how he has that sort of cocky side to him that makes him clash was Shea but also makes them so drawn to each other, haha. I am super excited for them to hang out, out of the cafe enviroment, ahhhh it's gonna be so great! :)

And I like how they're both sort of bringing out different sides to each other.

ALSO REALLY CURIOUS AS TO WHAT PASH'S DOING HMM PASH. YOU SEEM TO BE UP TO SHENANIGANS I'VE CAUGHT ONTO YOUR GAME. ;D

I just started reading this today and I quite like it :)
It's very well written, keep it up.

This is lovely, I really like both Shea and Oliver and I can't wait to see how this progresses.

I do believe that Shea is gonna be pissed when they show up.

Ahhh oh my god, new favourite story? Um, yes! c:

This is defintitely a lot different than most stories on Mibba of the slash variety by dear god that that ever make is absolutely fantastic! I think it's really cool that they're all in college or older instead of the regular cliche highschool scene, it really sets this story apart I think, and it gives a lot more maturity to the characters. Which, by the way, all the characters I love. I really think it's cool how they all have those quirks and characteristics that makes them real in my mind, like I could see them as people off the street this is happening, aha. And that realism makes me love it even more! Like how Pash is super secretive and Oliver sketches odd and Shea doesn't like anyone touching him.

Shea, ah oh my god- love him! He's got that sort of badassery to him, but inside he's just freaking cute. I feel like he's mostly just acting out because of his parents mixed with that natural sort of take-no-shit attitude. I seriously couldn't wipe the smile off my face when I started reading the part where he threw a rock threw the window- perfect beginning- and just whenever he talks to Pash. Fucking Pash. ^^

And then he goes and is all adorable with his crush on Oliver and "his" artist and they're his brownies and just alskjakjfhajkfsh no words. Too great.

I think it's really interesting too that Oliver draws and sketches but in a way that isn't flattering, but instead is very real. Usually most people go for the other approach but it adds something unique to his character. I've never read anything like him, but he has that air of mystery that makes me adore him and I just love reading about him.

I like Pash too just because he's fucking Pash, aha.

Mixed with your obviously amazing writing talent everything makes his story so amazing even though it's just three chapters so far, I'm so excited to read more! c: <3

I really like it so far! Keep it up! :)

I really like this story! Keep at it!
Ps. This is how I met my boyfriend!
He worked in a cafe and I always went there just to see him!
So I can definitely relate to Oliver

I am really impressed with how well this story is written so far! I really enjoy it.

Also, it kind of reminds me of my life lol I work in a cafe...so, I'm kind of Shea in a way. Super cool.

Great job!

Loving it. Can't wait to read the rest. C:

This is getting even more interesting. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Shea finally knows his name! Lol keep up the good work(:

:D GO IVAN AND PASH! >:D

I'm loving this already.
I really love Shea's personality, and I can't wait to learn more about Oliver.

Wow. Fantastic. Can't wait to read more!

this is pretty interesting update soon (:

Love it so far! Can't wait for more (:

I don't usually comment when I want to go to bed but I'm making time now becuause I really loved that. I think it was a really great introduction to the story because I'm hooked on the characters alright and I can't wait to find out more about the artist. I love how you didn't do the cliche of the artist painting a gorgeous picture and then them falling in love straight away. I live the twist as it makes the other guy feel uncomfortabke an he finds it slightly creepy (I feel bad for forgeting the name... Sheaor something. I bet that's completely wrong :s sorry. Basically, you did a great job at making the characters really interesting without giving away too much. Plus I feel like read more than just the first chapter, which is good haha With me my first chaters aren't as good becuase I'm never 100% sure how I want the first part ofmy story to be, but you did it really well.

Sorry for typos and not making sense. I just got back from holiday and it's late o I'm tired :( Cant wait for more though!