This Is Where It Falls Apart. - Comments

@ justeva.
Thank you. And yeah, I figured Ryan might not be the right fit in this story, but I always mix people that don't ideally fit with one another into fanfics, because it makes them different & usually is what others wouldn't consider doing.
I do realize what you are saying, but I never said why Katie was there, nor did Brad mention suicide as his reason for being there. I'm not trying to sound rude by pointing this out, but while Katie was speaking, Justin wasn't even listening to her, so no one really knows why she is there to the readers knowledge. Brad said he "cracked" due to bullying, but did not mention suicide. Some people have mental breakdowns, & just don't function well, therefore they shut down, mentally & physically. But neither mentioned suicide, & Ryan didn't expose why he is there *yet*. So I'm just trying to point out that not all of them are there due to a suicide attempt. Believe me, I know people that have ended up in places like that, & they were not there for suicide, but for depression that was leading them to that, & I have had my own battles as well, so I get what you are saying. I'm not trying to make it sound like I'm generalizing, but I didn't say all of them are there for a suicide attempt.
But, thank you for the feedback. It is appreciated.
:)

i'm not a huge fan of justin bieber, in fact i'm not even a fan but i still like this story. when you mentioned a ryan my first thought was ryan ross but then i thought i would be odd to see ryan in this story, but he is so that made me happy (:
while i was reading it and everyone in the hospital was talking about why there were there most of them said suicide and i found that idk weird?
when i was in the hospital only a few of us were suicidal but there were some eating disorders, some people that didn't even want to kill themselves but were self-harming or depressed and some kids were admitted for being on the verge of suicide.
mental hospital's don't just revolve around suicide, there's also mental disorders and a bunch of other things.
so yeah overall i really like it <3

@ SandraKaulitz
Thank you! I figured nobody was reading it, so I had been procrastinating in updating, haha. I'll do another update in the next couple days. Thank you for reading it! :)

This is unbelievably good! I love that this is so different. Pleaseee update soon!