Forbidden and Mistaken - Comments

  • bloomingrose101

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    @ celestial_royalty
    Oh, that's an error, haha. I namedher maddy in the draft, but changed it to eliza while publishing. :)
    February 22nd, 2014 at 04:28pm
  • celestial_royalty

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    Very sweet ending. It's sort of sad what happened to her father, but the three Malfoys and her mother were extremely touching. I'm not sure how 'Eliza' came from Madeleine but I'm assuming it's her middle name. Overall, this was pretty well written! <3
    September 3rd, 2013 at 11:50am
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    It's a little creepy for you to go on about her family tree, therefore making Draco a distant cousin for her to snog.
    September 3rd, 2013 at 10:16am