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  • Gurl

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    i like this! it's cool.
    November 18th, 2011 at 08:01am
  • K-N-R

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    :) awesome story :D can't wait to read more, its very well done
    November 9th, 2011 at 08:40pm
  • LoveOrDeath

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    I really like this story!:D
    November 9th, 2011 at 06:47pm
  • ilovetherev

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    I really like this story!! You put it together so well :D
    November 9th, 2011 at 04:29pm
  • vengefulXspirit

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    Aww it was so cute that they were dancing!
    November 9th, 2011 at 02:44pm
  • ilovetherev

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    I can't wait to read what you come up with, it's a really good story....even if the movie did freak me out lol
    October 27th, 2011 at 02:55am
  • teenhearts

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    Jesus, I can't really critique you on this, it's simply beautiful (god, that's the wrong word, but it is, in a sort of deluded, twisted way)
    Write more soon!
    October 23rd, 2011 at 09:59pm
  • The Punisher

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    Its good few things to work on. Okay this isn't gonna turn into them having sex every other chapter is it? Because I think that subtracts to the feel of the hills have eyes. Which leads me to my next point. When are we gonna see the mutants killing some people? I want to see some good old fashioned blood shed. One last thing make sure to keep to the feel of THHE, because some stories don't keep to the feel of what they are writing about. Example I'm reading a terminator fan fic and the two main characters have had more sex than they have had fights. I wouldn't suggest putting too much sex in here, every now and then fine but still some more killing would be cool. I'm guessing I'm just rambling on here. Good job and continue on.
    October 23rd, 2011 at 08:43pm
  • reeseynicole21

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    I love it thank you for the character list and update soon. Because I love it.
    October 23rd, 2011 at 08:16pm
  • vengefulXspirit

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    This is awesome
    October 23rd, 2011 at 08:13pm
  • teenhearts

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    'Tis bloody fantastic! I loved the film and I think you interpret the characters perfectly.
    October 22nd, 2011 at 06:29pm
  • Purified Poison

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    Its so good keep going. I'm Subscribed
    October 22nd, 2011 at 06:01pm
  • reeseynicole21

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    I love this story please put up character list? And I'm subcribed I love the story.
    October 22nd, 2011 at 05:58pm
  • Jagger.

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    I really like this! :) Please write more soon! I'm subscribed.
    October 22nd, 2011 at 05:10pm
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