I realize I already commented, but I'm gonna do it again since I'm already on a rampage :p This was really adorable, it's probably one of my favorites that you've written as well. I dunno, I just connect with the characters. I think the two boys mesh perfectly together, and the whole thing is just...adorable :)
okay, so I didn't know this was a slash because I clicked the link directly from the contest entry forum. so... until you talked about Dan "not knowing if [Cameron] was gay", I thought this was a heterosexual story. >.< hahaha. oh boy.
but anyways, I completely agree with Tongue Tied Ideas. I definitely thought this was an incest story and I mentally fist pumped.
honestly, this was such an adorable story. I really liked it a lot. Your writing style was great and the layout was very simple and readable. the only thing I suggest is breaking up the dialogue between characters speaking; it might make it a tad easier to read. but other than that, I have no complaints!
Whoop! I gotta say, I honestly thought this was about Dan and Ed at first, then I got excited, I'm a piner for incest, haha xD Then here comes the third wheel, Cameron, I was like meh. hehe Then the plot thickens and I ended up in a big mushy goof ball. This was so cute and to think they could have been lovers if they weren't too obsessed with thinking about things deemed necessary. I always hate it with a passion when two people, obviously feeling for each other but always get way in over their heads and end up not doing a move at all, but it's always satisfactory when they get there. Well, isn't it quite obvious that I like this? xD
This was really adorable, it's probably one of my favorites that you've written as well. I dunno, I just connect with the characters. I think the two boys mesh perfectly together, and the whole thing is just...adorable :)