Blank Canvas - Comments

  • I realize I already commented, but I'm gonna do it again since I'm already on a rampage :p
    This was really adorable, it's probably one of my favorites that you've written as well. I dunno, I just connect with the characters. I think the two boys mesh perfectly together, and the whole thing is just...adorable :)
    February 24th, 2012 at 02:46am
  • This was real cute :)
    November 12th, 2011 at 06:48am
  • okay, so I didn't know this was a slash because I clicked the link directly from the contest entry forum. so... until you talked about Dan "not knowing if [Cameron] was gay", I thought this was a heterosexual story. >.< hahaha. oh boy.

    but anyways, I completely agree with Tongue Tied Ideas. I definitely thought this was an incest story and I mentally fist pumped.

    honestly, this was such an adorable story. I really liked it a lot. Your writing style was great and the layout was very simple and readable. the only thing I suggest is breaking up the dialogue between characters speaking; it might make it a tad easier to read. but other than that, I have no complaints!

    fantastic job. c:
    October 31st, 2011 at 01:32am
  • Whoop!
    I gotta say, I honestly thought this was about Dan and Ed at first, then I got excited, I'm a piner for incest, haha xD
    Then here comes the third wheel, Cameron, I was like meh. hehe
    Then the plot thickens and I ended up in a big mushy goof ball.
    This was so cute and to think they could have been lovers if they weren't too obsessed with thinking about things deemed necessary.
    I always hate it with a passion when two people, obviously feeling for each other but always get way in over their heads and end up not doing a move at all, but it's always satisfactory when they get there.
    Well, isn't it quite obvious that I like this?
    xD
    October 28th, 2011 at 10:58pm
  • eeeeeeeeeeeehhhhh!
    This was so adorable!!!!
    Just...just perfect =]
    Great job!
    October 27th, 2011 at 11:21am