Set Fire to the Rain - Comments

  • Austin Carlile;

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    Aww, it's over?! *dies*

    Well, I really, really, REALLY can't wait to read the sequel. :3
    Loved this! :D
    March 24th, 2012 at 10:20pm
  • kili the dwarf

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    So I just read the first three chapters of this story and I think I like this one better than the other one of yours I read, no idea why, but maybe it's the fact that she's pregnant.

    Anyways, so far this seems to have a pretty good set-up and I'm looking forward to reading more of the story. I like how you gave Daryl a protective characteristic, I actually think that if he wasn't so reserved in the TV series he would be a very protective person for those he became close too.

    Well that's my two cents on what I think so far, hopefully it'll continue like this. Which I'm sure it will =D
    March 23rd, 2012 at 05:21am
  • tj oshie

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    awe, i'm so glad all the Dixon's are back together <3
    November 9th, 2011 at 01:09am
  • mori art ti

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    I'm glad Merle is back with them and that the group is (pretty much) together. The ending was super duper adorable and dripping with 'awww' :D

    I'm going to read and comment on Unknown Soldier right...now!
    November 9th, 2011 at 12:34am
  • mori art ti

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    I really love you for posting two :D

    Super suspenseful, super descriptive, super awesome. Just plain super. I'm loving that Merle is gonna be with them, and it'll be good 'cause he can protect them. Obviously Amy and Andrea can take care of themselves, but Gabby needs some protection to survive.

    When she went into false labor I was like aah! It would absolutely suck if she had to give birth in a FedEx van. Plus the baby would be all premature and might not make it...Just really well done, for making me nervous and excited and for making me love Gabby. She's such a relateable little sweetheart, and I'm anxious to see her and Daryl reunited!!

    Please update again soon :)
    November 8th, 2011 at 03:11am
  • Squeak

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    Yay for finding Merle! Please update soon!!!
    November 8th, 2011 at 02:57am
  • tj oshie

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    yes! pickles, chocolate, merle and hopefully daryl sooon?! hahaha so excited for the upcoming chapters! :)
    November 8th, 2011 at 01:59am
  • jacklynnirene

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    Yay! @ finding Merle! I love the trio of girls! I was scared when Gabby started having labor pains O.O

    It makes me nervous with Daryl and Gabby being apart, I hope they find each other soon :)
    November 8th, 2011 at 01:28am
  • mori art ti

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    So...Buh! I'm kind of strung out about Daryl and Gabby being seperated. He's gonna freak out about them being gone when they get back to camp, I can just see it. I like the friendship between all the women, and how you re-wrote the scene with Ed.

    I can't wait for more updates!!
    November 3rd, 2011 at 01:42am
  • Squeak

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    Another great chapter...YAY! I hope everybody gets together and gets back to camp before Daryl and them show up. Daryl would go ballistic if Gabby wasn't there. I like that you had Merle actually be able to saw through the cuffs instead of through his wrist.
    November 3rd, 2011 at 12:27am
  • tj oshie

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    oh my gosh, this story <3 so obsessed. hahah :) can't wait for an update!!!
    November 2nd, 2011 at 08:55pm
  • mori art ti

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    I liked that :)
    Poor Gabby and Daryl. I can't remember what goes on at the camp when they're gone to find Merle so the next chapter will be sort of a surprise for me haha.

    Good update!
    October 31st, 2011 at 02:50pm
  • TheJokersWife

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    This story is amazing. Please update soon! :)
    October 31st, 2011 at 05:10am
  • Squeak

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    I LOVE IT! I can't wait for more!
    October 31st, 2011 at 03:44am
  • mori art ti

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    I'm a huge fan of The Walking Dead, and this is really good :)

    Gabby is a cool character, and I hope we get to see her develop more. I love her and Daryl being together. (Not only because Daryl is so freakin' hot, but they're a cute couple).

    I can't wait to see how Gabby treats Rick, and how she's involved in Lori's relationship with Shane.

    Keep writing :)
    October 30th, 2011 at 10:55pm
  • jacklynnirene

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    I'm really liking this story so far!
    October 29th, 2011 at 07:53pm
  • PrincesssofDarknesss

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    Awwww!!! I've always heard Oh Shit Handle but Oh Shit Bar works too lol!!
    October 28th, 2011 at 01:15am
  • Squeak

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    Awww! He's so protective! I can't wait for more.
    October 27th, 2011 at 08:01pm
  • MrsBenjiMadden

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    IM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! :)
    (All captials were necessary for the awesomeness of this story.)
    October 27th, 2011 at 07:51am
  • Squeak

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    I love this so far. I like that you're starting slightly before the outbreak. I also like that there is more to Daryl and Merle than two angry, trigger happy, rednecks!
    October 26th, 2011 at 11:16pm