I'm not a fan of band slash, but it was Motley Crue, so I had to read it. I really like the way that you write. It kept me engaged in the story, and it all flowed really well. You write pretty realistic dialogue, which is a talent I lack; therefore, I'm jealous. I like how Nikki just picked him up, and how Tommy's childish disposition is really highlighted by the way you portrayed him. I'm not usually into dudes messing around, especially older ones, but man...that was hot. *laughs* Good job. More? :)
October 26th, 2011 at 04:47am