All I Ever Wanted. - Comments

  • screamolover

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    please update, I love this story so far [=
    March 22nd, 2014 at 04:53am
  • darkaly

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    I wish you were to update because this is amazing.
    April 14th, 2013 at 11:23pm
  • Kitten_

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    I really like this story so far, and Im looking forward to reading more. Update soon please!
    February 20th, 2013 at 11:57pm
  • xXHaleyHeartbreakXx

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    Wow only 2 comments? Are you kidding me? I really like this story so far. It's very well written and I can't wait until you post more.
    June 22nd, 2012 at 08:22pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    This is a great start and I can't wait to see what happens next.
    I'm incredibly curious as to what happened with Mr. Adair's past in New York.
    There were a few minor errors, a couple of words left out in a couple of sentences.
    “I guess this is everyone…” I muttered allowed.
    It's 'aloud' here. ^^
    Besides the few small errors, I found this to be well written.
    I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
    November 4th, 2011 at 05:40pm