This is a great start and I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm incredibly curious as to what happened with Mr. Adair's past in New York. There were a few minor errors, a couple of words left out in a couple of sentences. “I guess this is everyone…” I muttered allowed. It's 'aloud' here. ^^ Besides the few small errors, I found this to be well written. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.