I just read this story for the first time and I have to admit I did not see any of it coming! I had no idea he was dead all along! And then you killed her off! Definitely a different story line one you don't hear of very often! Great job with coming up with such a unique idea! And the fact that the following halloween she used the fact that she was dead to scare children was quite funny!
March 14th, 2014 at 04:05pm