@ sins-97 Haha yeah I decided to keep that bit in because I actually really liked it AND without it, it would be the shortest chapter ever XD. Thanks for the comment (Once again)
I totally remember this one. And I still love the last line. Part if shadow wants forest to win. That will always be awesome. I cannot wait for more but don't send yourself Cray Cray doing it. :D
And I must thank you firstly for thanking me, secondly for giving me something to do in the time I have to wait before going to my interview and thirdly FOR WRITING FREAKING AWESOME CHAPTERS THAT CREATE ALL OF THE LOVE FOR ALL OF THE PEOPLES. Also I adored the bit where Forest was all hyper then teasing the guys. That was super great. I hope you feel happier soon and just remember that I am always here if you need to chat.
@ sins-97 Haha yesss this story is pretty much going in a whole different direction...almost. Lets just say there's going to be a lot more Avenged and a lot more questions answered.
Ha. I am posting my comment above my comment from a long ass time ago. This is going in such an exciting direction already. I can't wait for more and the bit about never leaving each other behind if they ran has really changed things around. Can't wait for what's next.
Holy crap that last line. "Hazel was promised the stars. In the end, all she got was rocks painted gold. Fake, and uselss." Just that line. I cant get over how awesome this story is and how much i love it and like squeel when it is updated. Argh that entire chapter was EPIC, love the whole controlling her life bit and him not letting them control his. And the bit about not wanting to get rid of Shadow, that bit is so sweetly sad, like Shadow is all he has left now except Hazel. I cant believe it is over, you have to get that sequal up quick as otherwise may cry. So will the sequal pick up in adulthood? Cant wait.
Am still reading and wanting Zack to come back or at least if Forest does run away then zack should be the one to find him and they should have a big heart to heart and Zack should step up to the plate of being a dad to both of them. Anyway love the update and Forests confliction over everything and the little flashback of their mom. Did she have the same thing as Forest does, which sounds kinda like schitzophrenia but also different from it. Hope we see an update soon.