The Mess I Made - Comments

I'm afraid I don't have much to say... blame my mood :/ and NICE WriteSingPlay checked this out she is AWESOME! legit she rocks :D and wow can you write me in punching Steven and Katherine? legit I really want to! GAH they just piss me off and legit Zach she said Breathalyzer so clearly she isn't lying she isn't that stupid cause you would make her take one knowing you :P and if Steven was so worried then why did he serve her? Zach you are an idiot seriously! and wow... I guess this is my not much to say... I mean I didn't feel like commenting but its you and your story so I had to :P

WriteSingPlay: Oh my gosh :o thank you so much(and ALLSTARLOVE333 of course :)) yes I do have a twitter! I'm @mariahmagenta :D and no way! That's cool. I'll have to remember to tell you happy birthday then! Ah just thank youuu<3

Okayy, wow. This is a really fricken amazing story. I blame ALLSTARLOVE333 for sending me though ;) I absolutely love this story and I'm on like chapter 8 now. I started last night. Oh heyy, do you have twitter, I wanna add you :) And guess what??? YOu're going too see A-DUB in concert...on MY birthday :P Hahaha I think of that as amusing. But yes, this story is amazing, and you're such a good writer ;)

Hey Its Ali: hahahahaha even Zach? :( he's just dumb if anything hahah and yes omg I would laugh so hard if that happened. I just pictured that happen all in my head.
ALLSTARLOVE333: Yeah I don't know what's wrong with it :/ I'm a little off right now. I think I need to just go back and read a couple of chapters to get a feel for it or something idk I could feel it being off and tried to fix it but it fell flat -_- YES Steven is the guy that raped Nikki haha I haven't mentioned him really...he's been trolling in the background. Someone needs to hit her so we'll see hahaha

well I'm a C writer as well but I still write :) and dude! this is a GREAT story... the latest chapter was good but not my fav from you nt gonna lie... and Steven is the chick who raped her sis? sorry I'm bad with names :P well can't wait for more :D and yeah you should write me in punching her lol JK

WELL WELL WELL. SHIT JUST GOT REAL.

Steven, Katherine, Zach, dear God they all need to be punched in the face. I literally just had a vision of Skye taking that liquor, walking on stage, and forcing it into Zachary's eyes as revenge. Man I have issues xD

I wish I had a friend like Cam too :/

Hey Its AlI!: My bad XD and I totally just read that just like it was said in the movie.
Aw Camlynne sounds kind of cute! haha thank you :) I wish I had a best guy friend like that D:

There's something about every single chapter that makes me an emotional fucking wreck whenever I finish reading haha. Something triggers in my brain...

On Katherine: Don't be fooled because she may seem like your typical selfish, back-stabbing, slut-faced ho-bag, but in reality she's so much more than that. Lol me quoting Mean Girls xD

I'm honestly so glad the whole Camlynne issue has been resolved. Friends forever and nothing hurts :] asdfghjkl Their friendship is beautiful <3

ALLSTARLOVE333: I'm really self conscious with my writing because I'm normally a C writer in my English class :s but thank you! I am so thankful that you've stuck by this story for so long especially since it took me MONTHS to get back into it. Be my guest XD I'm surprised no one's punched Katherine yet. She needs it :P

Zach is a big fruit!

I LOVE this story fyi so have confidence in it! because it is AMAZINg

I legit liked the chapter adn I love Cameron it was a needed and perfect chapter :)

I don't have much to say today :'(

o wait one more thing! Can I punch Katherine? O.o PLEASE!

iloveadub15: Oh my goodness ^_^ thank you so so much! I do the same thing! I spent an entire day reading this 48 chapter story and the sequel! gkdjfgjf I'm just surprised that someone would do that with mine :o

this morning i spent the 2 hours i was supposed to be doing my homework for the current day.. reading this.. i couldnt stop so i had to do my homework at school.. oh well i love this<3

Malouca: :o really? That's pretty cool! haha thank you so much<3

Good story! I read it on Wattpad before I found it on here! :)

AllstarWeekend Fan43: Thank you!
ALLSTARLOVE333: Yes exactly! At least you get it hkfjghljfklgh Zach on the other hand...he's just a big fruit. :p Thank you for reading and commenting!
Hey Its Ali!: WOOOOOOOOO I still thing Zachlynne sounds so weird to me XD Cariana sounds kind of cute :p if it was me it would be Camariah and Zachariah idk how to do Michael and Mariah since it's the same first letter...anyway XD and yes I know I actually thought about her slapping him but I went against it because I already made things worse than it needs to be haha

I like the focus on the key moments. And I officially have my ships for this story! Cariana and Zachlynne haha. ZACH IS IN FUCKING DENIAL I SWEAR TO THE HIGHEST HEAVEN. Lol. I can tell you really like tension because everytime I want Zach to loosen up he just fucking loses his shit and gets stiffer. That's how in denial he is....I'd slap him if I were Skyelynne, but like the story goes, I'd probably make this little group's issues worse xD

It's short and good and the second she is gone he will miss her because he does love her and it won't be the way he missed her last time because last time she was messed up this time it's different because she was the same girl she was last time minus the beer so she is perfect for him so missing her is different

ooooh!! can't wait to read more!!!

Hey Its Ali!: I know hahaha of course when things start to get better I make them worse. I always do that XD this story may be a bit longer than I expected. I thought I would be done by like chapter 20 but there's so much shit I still have to do aha I LIKE TENSION WHAT CAN I SAY?!
ALLSTARLOVE333: ZACH IS A DUMBASS THAT IS ALL THAT NEEDS TO BE SAID! XD AND WOOO FOR PSYCHOANALYZING :) You pretty much still got it down to a t! You can't really blame him for the way he's acting though :/ but still. He needs to just get over it already hahah but I just love tension and now everything is royally screwed up XD

Alright psychoanalyzing time again cause I must!

Alright Zach is torn and part of him wants to forgive her and another part doesn't. He wants a excuse not to apologize because of his ego and his strong hotheadedness. He however is an idiot because 1 she did nothing, 2 even if she did do something he shouldn't be pissed about it he has no right, he keeps pushing her away 3 he doesn't let her explain.

It's as if he is so torn and wants her back but is so freaking afraid of being hurt again he will use any excuse to hate her...

Now if I was Sky I would go up to him chase him and start yelling at him. Tell him that he is an idiot because 'I' was moving away from Cam's advances cause 'I' still an hopelessly never going to stop in love him (Zach) and only sees Cameron as a friend, because he wouldn't let 'me' explain, and because 'I' know he is doing every freaking thing he can to assume the worst of 'me' He wants to be mad at me to protect his heart, and 'I' get it, but he can't use that because nothing happened, and nothing would happen because 'I' love Cameron unconditionally, but as a brother and best friend. So all he proved was that he was to proud to apologize, that he still likes 'me', and that he is acing irrational. 'I' would also tell him he is blind if he didn't see 'me' step back when Cameron stepped towards 'me'.

Then I would talk to Ari and make sure she understands what was REALLY going down

Just GRR I love Zach but he is FREAKING Pissing me OFF! I don't think you realize how freaking frustrated I am!