December 8th, 2011 at 12:29am
Because mentally he was perfectly fine, as long as he was taking his sweet candy. He just needed someone or something around, something else then these things he keeps injecting into his blood. Maybe another soul. Maybe he should get a fish he could talk to everyday. But wouldn’t that make him even more sad? You can’t cuddle with a fish. You can’t hold them, like you can with a dog or cat. <3
This should have way more comments. Oh poor Ollie! He needs to find someone soon!
I knew a girl on heroine once and she said something so much like this that I nearly gasped. You're writing this so realistically and beautifully and I wish I was better at this commenting thing so I could express just how good this is.
From the summary to the part above to It isn’t like Ollie is going to change the world, though. He’s much too lonely for that. and the end, it made me feel something. Agreeing with what they said above, I definitely wasn't expecting drugs. The beginning with the music made me think it was about some average kid at a concert or something and happy, but the transition was so harsh and real. I hope you continue.