Soooo, uh, 'bout a few years late but props for the 'Tallica references; especially since you hinted at the inspiration for Metallica's For Whom the Bell Tolls! Burton and Hammet were/are total literature buffs and a few of the band's songs were influenced by classic works of writing. You probably already knew this though :P
I absolutely love the characters! They're developed so well and I just couldn't stop grinning like the entire time (so far), it's written and structured great too! =]
I was beginning to read the part titled, 'I Told You So' and i'm also listening to music, and the song, 'Told You So' by Cassadee Pope came on, and omg . it was just perfect . <3
This is just wow It was so sweet and cute, I had the biggest grin on my face the whole time I read it! I love the way that you made Cas, you managed to capture his personality perfectly even in this scenario, which I think people would have messed up. You must have done tons of research before to get all your facts right, I'm so impressed ^.^ The whole story was beautiful written as well. Congratulations on being awesome ^.^
Just read this whole story in one night. I LOVE it. I am now moving on to the sequel and you will VERY much be hearing from me again soon. And I like the end. And the winky face haha