here's some constructive criticism: makes her heart thump inside her chest. Her heart beats rapidly inside her chest that was kind of repetitive, I'd try and change that or just keep the latter part.
like it?" She ask She doesn't need to be capitalized.
So, to get the feel of this song again I turned it on and I was reading it while listening to Alex's voice I think you did really well in trying to portray the song and it's meanings. I love this song so much, I started a full story on it hah :'D It's an amazing story and this is an incredibly cute one-shot! I loved reading it :3
makes her heart thump inside her chest. Her heart beats rapidly inside her chest
that was kind of repetitive, I'd try and change that or just keep the latter part.
like it?" She ask
She doesn't need to be capitalized.
So, to get the feel of this song again I turned it on and I was reading it while listening to Alex's voice
I think you did really well in trying to portray the song and it's meanings. I love this song so much, I started a full story on it hah :'D It's an amazing story and this is an incredibly cute one-shot! I loved reading it :3