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  • MissC81

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    So....I'm reading this story for about the 12th time. Even though I know it's coming, it always makes me so sad when I get to the end of this one and it's not done yet. Pleeeaaaasssseeee update this!
    December 16th, 2021 at 07:34am
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    Ahhhhh the plans I had for James. He was going to go full psycho, at least enough for the question to be asked; who do you pick, the psycho you know or the one you don't? tehe
    April 17th, 2021 at 06:42pm
  • MissMisery

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    @ Brian Haner Jr
    Oooooh is it James?! Creepy fucker he is... And still such a complex character! At this point, I don’t even care if the ending comes in dot point form! I just NEED to know. NEEEEEEEEEED.
    February 28th, 2021 at 10:51pm
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    @ MissMisery
    Makers breath but I'm honestly so surprised people are even still reading this, let alone enjoying it!

    I sadly haven't written anything for A7X - or for mibba - in yeeeeeeears. I've been having a lot of writers block - which seems to be the norm for us all - and my health has been absolutely shite lately - NOT the Rona, my blood hates my body haha - so I've not been able to get anything of substance written beyond the random one-shot (which I post on Ao3 and is all just basically filth haha)

    I'm staying mum on the pregnancy thing though because I remember the madness I had planned for all that even all these years later Wow I wil say this though; Jess will get her ass-kicking boots on but it might not be Matt's ass she kicks.

    Bless you guys for still reading this mess of a story haha
    February 18th, 2021 at 01:38am
  • MissMisery

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    @ Brian Haner Jr
    Heeeeeeeeeey girl, hey! Just finished this the second time to me over... Still as madly enthralled as the first time, if not MORE so! I still believe Jess is pregnant, and I still believe she is going to fucking nail Shadows’ ass to the wall. I just can’t leave this alone. I NEED to see how this ends. I need to live through the plot twists, and tears, and anger, and adorableness, and complete strange and inappropriate boners...
    November 29th, 2020 at 12:30pm
  • MissMisery

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    @ violetshade
    Just remember, against the doctors orders, they still got it on after she got out of hospital. And they did again when Hera took Nate for ice cream, even though Bri didn’t blow his load... It only takes one! And the psychic also said something about the whole pride coming into heat at the same time, alluding to Gaia, but was it JUST Gaia? Maybe Hera? Maybe Jess? What’s going to happen to poor Zane? James and Mack? I NEED to know. Like NEED. *cries*
    July 6th, 2020 at 07:45am
  • violetvictoria

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    @ MissMisery
    Pregnant again!? Seriously didn't even consider that, have no idea how. But I don't think there are the normal hints like in the first story. (I am totally using this as an excuse to re-read and look for hints!) But I think this is Jess's time to be a total badass. Like, maybe she has a tiny bit of help, but she needs to handle this given their past and the fact that he messed with her kid! God, I'd give anything to read Shadows get his comeuppance!
    July 6th, 2020 at 04:24am
  • MissMisery

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    @ Brian Haner Jr
    For the love of all things unholy... Please, PLEASE come back! I mean, I’m happy to sell one of the crotch goblins for this privilege *shrugs* I really want to see Jess nail his ass to the wall. Hell hath no fury like a woman, let alone a MOTHER, scorned. I have a sneaking suspicion Jess is already pregnant again. And I’m wondering if that will have Rev stepping up against Shadows, and keeping her safe. And if ANYONE can break the Rev’s frozen exterior, it will be Jess and Nate... Please don’t make us hunt you down Shadows style and chain you to the laptop to finish this master of disaster piece *I made you a cookie but I eated it kitty face* C’mon, Kitten <3
    July 6th, 2020 at 01:32am
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    @ violetshade
    Haha, well whatever works :D I'm always cautious about what I read on planes because I almost always end up next to someone that likes to read over my damned shoulder lol

    Yeah I can't imagine there'd be many boyfriends/husbands/partners that would get it haha
    February 12th, 2018 at 05:28am
  • violetvictoria

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    Oh, it took way longer than that lol, it's just when I read a good chunk of it. It was kinda funny, cause I didn't have wi fi on the plane, so I took screen shots of the pages! ha.
    That was the same flight my hubs caught me writing some Synacky ;) he just doesn't get it lol
    February 12th, 2018 at 02:51am
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    @ violetshade
    I imagine it took up a long part of that flight, it is one of the longest things I've ever written haha I'm glad to know it elicited such a reaction :D
    February 12th, 2018 at 02:14am
  • violetvictoria

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    You should have seen me when I got to the end of the page and there was no "chapter **" button. I hadn't noticed before hand how many chapters there were, or where I was. I practically screamed and almost threw my ipad into the wall. Good thing I wasn't in public, lol. (I did read a ton of this story on a plane, though, but not the end)
    Me: "WHAT!!! NO NO NO NO NO!!!!" Wink
    February 11th, 2018 at 07:09pm
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    @ violetshade
    Yeah, it was a pretty big cliffhanger haha
    February 11th, 2018 at 05:37pm
  • violetvictoria

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    Ahhhh! I am so dying for more of this story, especially after the EXTREME cliffhanger!!
    February 11th, 2018 at 03:49pm
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    @ violetshade
    It wasn't Syn, he has his own story arc in the second half of this story, one that links up with the Russian Mafia side of things.
    February 11th, 2018 at 12:56pm
  • violetvictoria

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    Matt was going to meet his match!?!? I can just see Synyster busting in, knives and guns blazing and saving her and their son--after busting out of jail or something I guess. Uh. DYING to read more would be an understatement!
    January 17th, 2018 at 03:47pm
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    @ violetshade
    I'm trying to get back into it and trying to remember what direction I had laid out for it - all I remember for sure was that Matt was going to meet his match.
    January 17th, 2018 at 08:05am
  • violetvictoria

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    Noooooooooooooooo!!!!! Hope you finish this one day! Such good stories. Terrifying, considering how creepy Matt could be, but very good.
    December 31st, 2017 at 04:34am
  • violetvictoria

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    Ch 28. Holy fucking hell. I love how you write both Brian and Synyster. And you soooo did this justice. Dammmmmn. And yes, he is hot as all effing hell. The knives and the holstering up? guhhhhh.
    December 29th, 2017 at 05:14pm
  • Tammieeexo

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    Omg noooooo, i nearly cried!! Its just got so good!! Ugh scream has literally been ny favorite story i've read on here!!! Im dying to read this story longshot but please please please think about returning to it, you are an amazing writer!!
    January 26th, 2017 at 11:33am