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  • Takoda

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    I'm liking this story so far :3 Very tragic. Please do remember, though, that there is a difference between 'your' and 'you're'. I've noticed a few mistakes like that, but other than that, it's really good. Keep updating!
    September 3rd, 2013 at 03:13pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Thank you for the new update!!!!! Please write more soon!!!!!!!
    August 31st, 2013 at 04:42pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Nina and Detective Baxter can finally relate to each other over their losses! I really hope Nina does let her in more and they can better understand each other! I really loved this chapter! Update soon!
    April 16th, 2013 at 04:59pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I am very happy that she is trying to get better and move on! I would love to see her more with Anthony! Please update soon!
    April 8th, 2013 at 11:50pm
  • IceDeath.

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    This is quite heart throbbing...Like, her entire family is dead, and she wants to give up, but now shes trying to get better. Just wow. Lol. Haven't quite read anything like this. Update soon!!
    February 17th, 2013 at 05:35pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Thank you again for the new update! Update soon!
    January 20th, 2013 at 12:30am
  • iLove-iDream

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    I will, hopefully adding a new chapter tonight or tomorrow. Thank you for reading : )
    December 28th, 2012 at 11:49pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I really love the new chapter! I really hope she opens up to him and tells him her name!!!! Please update more soon!
    December 28th, 2012 at 09:19pm
  • caylah

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    wow im like wow chapters 1-8 i had watery eyes soooo sad but sooo good at the same time
    December 28th, 2012 at 05:59am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Thank you so much for updating again!!! Please update soon!
    September 30th, 2012 at 12:42am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Please start updating on this story again! I already love it! Please don't let that be the end!
    August 31st, 2012 at 01:50pm