Black Magic Boy - Comments

  • LoVe Is ReAl

    LoVe Is ReAl (100)

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    Wow! This is beautiful!!! I'm in love with it already!!! I love it almost as much as I love Jimmy Page! Everything is so well written and descriptive, I can't wait for the next chapter!
    November 19th, 2011 at 12:00am
  • the power of justice

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    Even though your summary is very short and your layout is quite plain, it immediately captured my attention and it just pulled me in straight away. I don't normally read fan-fiction and this is a fandom that I'm totally clueless in, so this is going to be a new thing for me :D

    Your descriptions and vocabulary is truly fantastic, and the narrator's emotions just leap off the page. I feel bad for her/him, obviously she's/he's not mentally well and is facing depression. You end the chapter on an intriguing note and it makes me wonder what happened to the narrator to make them spiral into an empty hole of depression ;o Good job so far!
    November 18th, 2011 at 11:52am
  • mk ultra

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    Oh. My. God. The layout is gorgeous, one of my favorite pictures of Jimmy. The summary absolutely pulled me in, especially since it showed me that you weren't going to make Jimmy out to be an asshole like most people do. And the first chapter. Absolutely beautiful. I can't find the words to describe quite how beautiful, actually. You're a metaphorical mastermind. It actually made me really emotional because I feel a lot, LOT like her. The tug of war between holding onto hopes most would deem unrealistic and giving into the deviant reality that most people that have felt the way I do, have fallen into. I adore this. Please post the next chapter asap??
    November 18th, 2011 at 08:19am
  • mk ultra

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    Ok I haven't even read the first chapter yet but holy fuck. Jimmy Page is like. Omg. His guitar solos took my virginity. Not even kidding. I love you. K so I'm gonna go read it now!
    November 18th, 2011 at 08:10am